Comments | cassyl: Fic: "Ruse de Guerre" (Norrington/Sparrow, PG-13)

cassyl

Fic: "Ruse de Guerre" (Norrington/Sparrow, PG-13)

Jul 22, 2006 13:54

Yeah, I wrote Sparrington. It's true. And I'm writing more.

( Don't follow the cut unless you enjoy piratical gayness )

Comments 48

greenmtnboy18 July 22 2006, 19:45:56 UTC

Wheee! Oh my, that was DELIGHTFUL! I love it! I'm a huge Norrington fan, and this is great look at him... very much what we see on screen in DMC, and I *love* him using the weapon of sex against Jack... why *not* after all? LOL! And so *almost* effectively! Love Jack's reactions, as well... *perfect*.

Excellent voices... characterizations are just right and I could hear them both beautifully. I'm also terribly eager for more, to see if Jack's reading James' right (I of course am biased and therefore hoping he is... hoping he is indeed seeing a desire that is definitely *there*). :-D

Great stuff!

greenmtnboy18 July 22 2006, 19:47:11 UTC

sigh... please excuse the apostrophe typos... I'm overly excited by your great fic

cassyl July 23 2006, 04:05:46 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind and thorough feedback. And I'll excuse any and all typos with a happy heart.

elessil July 22 2006, 19:48:55 UTC

Oh very nice. I do like the trick of the kissing to pick Jack's pockets. Sneaky James, and I had make him do that myself once.

Great work.

cassyl July 23 2006, 04:07:49 UTC

It's not quite the newest trick in the book, but I feel like it fits here. I wanted to kind of mirror the sexual frustration Jack goes through with Elizabeth, and having James attempt the same trick that Elizabeth later succeeds in using was part of the idea. Anyhow, thanks for the kind words!

mactink July 22 2006, 19:50:52 UTC

Brilliant. I love the ambiguity over the desire in Norrington's eyes and whether it was real or fake. I also love the way that you always refer to them as Jack and Norrington, it works really well in their relationship.

cassyl July 23 2006, 04:10:32 UTC

I'm glad the Jack-Norrington thing worked for you. I often have trouble believing that Jack would call James by his first name in fics, and it's good to know that I'm not the only one who can see Jack calling him "Norrington." In any case, thank you!

les_mis_24601 July 22 2006, 20:18:44 UTC

Wow..that ws really good..and hot.

cassyl July 23 2006, 04:11:00 UTC

High praise! Thank you.

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cassyl July 23 2006, 04:12:10 UTC

Oh, boy, "full of hotness." I think this comment is going in my diary under "nicest things ever said about one of my fics." Thanks!