Fic: "Deliverence" (Norrington/Sparrow, R)

[cassyl]

Last installment of the late-night gay!

Comments

[jenlan]

Very beautifully written and I think it's rather poignant how it ended with both parting like that. Jack is being all noble and not taking advantage and James, while miserable, cannot break his dignity/honor that was so hard-won back. I really think it would be interesting to imagine James' thoughts about what just happened and for him to do some soul-searching...leading to the conclusion Jack had understood, even as he understood Jamie's inability to give it.

[cassyl]

I'm thinking along those same lines right now, and, while I can't make any promises, it's definitely something I think I'd like to pursue. Thank you so much for your thoughtful, and very kind, review.

[polly_glot]

Perfect end to the arc, love. It's always nice to see Norrington refuse - true to his character.

[cassyl]

I'm glad that worked for you. Thanks for the kind words.

[belleimani]

It's so sad but I can see it happening like this. Well done.

[cassyl]

Thanks very much.

[belleimani]

You're quite welcome!

[lilfluffykitten]

Just finished the arc, and that was a lovely threesome.

There were some things a man could do, and some things he simply couldn’t, no matter how much it might pain him.

Gah! That's so sad, but true...

I really liked this, I like that whole idea of nobility and honour - from both parties.

Sniffle...

[cassyl]

Thank you! I'm really pleased those qualities came through, because that was something I really felt was necessary in this story.

[kikislasha]

Gah. I had to read all three in quick succession.

You are rather good at this sexual tension gig, aren't you? It's almost not fair. Because I could have been reading this six years ago. lol. <3 Love it.

[cassyl]

I think unresolved sexual tension might just be my wheelhouse, although resolving it's quite nice, too. Glad to know you enjoyed them, though! Thanks.