Chapter 4: Capable hands

Nov 02, 2013 20:06

A/N: I confess, writing this has been really hard, not only time wise, which by itself is a struggle, but trying to keep with the "spirit" of the fic. I study a career somewhat related to health, so the first time I wrote this chapter it had more technical stuff than what I wanted, because I want this to be more "from the gut". So I let it rest for ( Read more... )

peter burke, fanfiction, white collar, whitecollar, neal caffrey, hurt/comfort, fanfic

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frostfalcon November 3 2013, 01:57:22 UTC
It's being read... ^_^ and I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next, thanks for sharing!

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catu2111 November 5 2013, 03:37:18 UTC
Thanks for reading, I mean it.

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caseyf123 November 3 2013, 01:59:11 UTC
What a great chapter. Neal's reaction when Peter had to let go of his hand was just heart wrenching. What a perfect example of the bond they share. Without it, they are both lost. Nice job!

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catu2111 November 5 2013, 03:38:27 UTC
Glad you liked it, I do want this fic more about emotions than actions

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sapphire2309 November 3 2013, 09:10:09 UTC
Awesome!

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catu2111 November 5 2013, 03:38:51 UTC
Thanks a lot!

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marcelasue November 3 2013, 15:58:10 UTC
Oh, I'm still reading and still loving it. I'll definitely will keep reading :D

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catu2111 November 5 2013, 03:39:27 UTC
And to my loyal readers I'll do my best to update faster

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marcelasue November 5 2013, 04:25:40 UTC
Neal would say "take your time, do it right" ;D I don´t mind waiting, it´s worth it

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deepasocean November 6 2013, 17:20:03 UTC
Intense (shivering).
I want moar!!!!
Please maje sone realizr, especially Peter that Neal can't see and can't hear. I hope it isn't permanent.

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deepasocean November 6 2013, 17:24:13 UTC
Allow me to re-type:
Please make someone realize, especially Peter, that Neal can't see and can't hear. I hope it isn't permanent.

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catu2111 November 7 2013, 03:11:05 UTC
Oh no! I promise to leave every character in the same condition it was when I found it

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