Comments | catwalksalone: NCIS fic: Wrong Move, Right Time, DiNozzo/McGee, PG

catwalksalone

NCIS fic: Wrong Move, Right Time, DiNozzo/McGee, PG

Oct 10, 2009 15:58

This may well be the post-ep fic that you are looking for, in that it's post-ep and also fic. Other than that, ymmv.

Post-703 (The Inside Man), 2700 words, PG, enthusiastic thumbs up from

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2009: fanfic, probilicious, tv: ncis

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miscellanny October 10 2009, 15:20:15 UTC

Why don't you want to be with me, McGee?" He emphasizes the rhyme as if to minimize the plaintive tone of the question.

sadkjf;asldfkjsl;akdfj OH TONY oh that is just. Such a perfect character moment. :(!

I was gonna paste more but I got distracted by the fic, which is just about exactly what I wanted. Yup. Pretty much perfect.

*stupidly happyface*

catwalksalone October 11 2009, 08:55:07 UTC

Thank you! And, oh, I'm so glad you picked out that line because the image/audio was so clear in my head and I really wanted to get it across. *satisfied sigh*

shetiger October 10 2009, 15:31:34 UTC

Oh, awwwww. There are so many things about this I love. (Well, I love all of it, but those especial spots, I mean.) And yes, this is totally the post-ep fic I was looking for.

"Ziva," he says as if that explains everything,

Oh, yes.

"Correct. Ten points to you. And when did I buy this house?"

Tony bought a house for him? *flail*

Jethro doesn't do well with public displays of affection and is at once barking and trying to get his nose in between the two of them to join in the game of happy families.

Awwww, Jethro! So perfect. (And wow, that's a phrase I just never expected to say in response to NCIS fic.)

no way Abby's going into the Sahara with that skin tone. Also, she's not a freaky Mossad assassin.

Heee heee.

catwalksalone October 11 2009, 08:57:19 UTC

And yes, this is totally the post-ep fic I was looking for.

Yay, thank you! *punches air*

Tony bought a house for him?

If you ask him, he'll say he bought a house for them, but then he'd never have even thought of it if it weren't for Tim and Jethro, so make of that what you will. They're a family! I mean, I wrote it and it still makes me flail. :D

celli October 10 2009, 18:34:21 UTC

Well played! :D:D :D:D:D

catwalksalone October 11 2009, 08:57:53 UTC

Why, thank you, ma'am. *takes a bow*

♥

jack_infinitude October 10 2009, 21:11:30 UTC

Oh, boys. *flail!* Tony bought a house! So that he and McGee and Jethro could live together! And he even made sure there was a separate room for McGee to use! And Jethro is their dog!

This is so wonderful and omg my heart is exploding with happiness. (It's a two story house! And McGee drinks tea!)

catwalksalone October 11 2009, 09:00:38 UTC

Thank you! They love each other SO MUCH OMG. (I may actually have played around with Google Street View, and, um, looked up dog parks in DC/Alexandria before now to figure out where Tony would move to. I actually had the street picked out at one point. La la la.)

Tim likes peppermint tea because it aids the digestive process. That, and it tastes good.

shihadchick October 10 2009, 23:22:01 UTC

Aww, I love this. And oh god I need to catch up on NCIS. But LOVE.

There are many things Tim is scared of--most of them are Gibbs--but Tony in grammatically precise mood has to be near top of the list. It usually means he's focused, clear-headed and very, very pissed.
I love this paragraph especially; it's so spectacularly perfectly THEM. Allllllll of them. Yes.

*twirls you and is delighted by Tim and Tony*

catwalksalone October 11 2009, 09:02:41 UTC

Yay! I have MISSED you. *glomp* (Not that you're under any obligation to comment on every fic because NO, that would be ridiculous, but it always makes me happy to see you because, you know, stealth eagle. ♥)

And thank you! *is happily twirled*

CATCH UP, you will not regret it OMG.

shihadchick October 12 2009, 03:57:58 UTC

*has now been earwormed by the stealth eagle song*

Caaaaaaaaaat I miss youuuuuuuuu. I was about to say "I keep thinking about you in the shower" which sounds SO WRONG but that's where I do my quality thinking, so! I keep hoping Izzykitty is doing okay and that you're all goood and I miss your faaaaaaaaaaaaaace and also I miss those darling boys in the Navy Yard, the end.

And omg I have heard Things about this season, yes. :D As soon as we're done with Greek NCIS is back on the menu! (Kat and I were starting to get a bit ODd on procedurals. Like we were worried about finding bodies, given that we'd been mainlining NCIS *and* Bones. :D)

catwalksalone October 12 2009, 15:20:43 UTC

You can think about me in the shower if you like, I do not mind! *leers at you* Izzykitty is doing great except for how she tried to chase some crows only the crows ended up chasing her and then we nearly died laughing. I miss your faaaaaaaaaaaaaace, too. *stabs distance*

You won't regret it, I promise. And and and AND, when you've watched and gone OMFG DID THEY REALLY DO THAT? you come and find me and squee, right? Right. *bounces*

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