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catwalksalone

NCIS fic: Wrong Move, Right Time, DiNozzo/McGee, PG

Oct 10, 2009 15:58

This may well be the post-ep fic that you are looking for, in that it's post-ep and also fic. Other than that, ymmv.

Post-703 (The Inside Man), 2700 words, PG, enthusiastic thumbs up from

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2009: fanfic, probilicious, tv: ncis

Comments 59

omarm_me October 12 2009, 10:08:03 UTC

Hi! I have put most of your recent stories on my memory list, but have been terrible rude and not commented on one yet. I think :/ Might be wrong, have to check again.

Anyway. I just wanted to let you know I really like them a lot. And I will be stalking you from now on. If you don't mind ;)

catwalksalone October 12 2009, 15:35:14 UTC

Hello, and thank you! I'm delighted you've been enjoying my stories. Have fun stalking!

Again in two parts. I'll have to restraint to copy/paste. schtroumph_c October 12 2009, 12:19:11 UTC

Nananananère! I waited until I had more than a few minutes during the day to read it. No sleeping privation!

does his best juggling hot coals impression

I like that Tony always give his best, no matter what.

Red light, Timmy, red light! Did you say you were going to sue her shady ass for harassment?"

Abby is the only woman allowed to harass Tim, everybody knows that.

Tony's rubbing so vigorously at the dish he's going to rub the pattern right off. And it's engraved.

That's dedication.

He dips the fork back in the suds and scrubs again. It's very important to do this right, or next time there'll be all gross, crusty stuff on the tines and that's the way food poisoning is spread.

That too. And totally not how I do it.

"Oh," says Tony. And, "Oops, silly me! Sorry," as the dish shatters on the floor, shards skittering across the linoleum ( ... )

Re: Again in two parts. I'll have to restraint to copy/paste. schtroumph_c October 12 2009, 12:19:36 UTC

His eyes fly open and he gasps out an "Oh!", getting to his feet and taking a step towards Tony.

Yeah!

"You bought this place for us. For the three of us."

So much love!

Tony pumps his arms in the air then cups his hands around his mouth, making a noise like the sound of a thousand fans cheering through radio static. "And the crowd goes wild! Timothy McGee, registered genius, terrible swordsman, spectacularly boyfriended, wins the top prize. It's never been done be-"

Only he has to shut up then because Tim's kissing him, reveling in the hard press of Tony's body against his. He wraps his arms around Tony's back and hugs tight, burying his face in Tony's neck. There's a tight band around his own chest that isn't only caused by the fact he's had his breath knocked out of him with discovery. Tony's hugging him back and muttering something into his hair

And cute, and love, and cutie love.

"You totally love me," he says, and his smile could power a 100-watt bulb, minimum ( ... )

Re: Again in two parts. I'll have to restraint to copy/paste. catwalksalone October 12 2009, 15:40:45 UTC

Hey, you! *squishes* I'm glad you liked it.

Poor little Tony. It's hard to be in the other position when you've been on the other side all your life. And Tim who doesn't get it!

I know, right? Tony's not happy with this lesson he's having to learn and Tim should get it, dammit, what more does a Very Special Agent need to do? *pets Tony*

Were there tests and ticky boxes? "Shut-down time after blowjob: ….." "Shut-down time after sex: …" "Shut-down time after awesome cooking:…"

Well, it's Tony, so I'm presuming...yes. :D

Poor Jethro, all alone. Bet it happens often.

More than he'd like, C, more than he'd like. ♥

He tells him bedtime stories. He's to keep.

Agreed.

etcetera_cat October 12 2009, 21:55:05 UTC

So I'm now all kinds of flaily because yes, THIS or something very like it is what happened after that episode, with the dumb Tim (oh, how dumb) and the hurt Tony (oh, squish) and the realisations and the awesomeness and ♥

One day I will be able to leave coherent reviews for fic. Today is not that day.

catwalksalone October 13 2009, 07:20:02 UTC

Yay! *twirls you* THEY LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH, EM.

etcetera_cat October 13 2009, 20:13:56 UTC

They really really do!

singer_s_lament October 13 2009, 14:21:01 UTC

WOW. This is just fabulous.

There are many things Tim is scared of--most of them are Gibbs--but Tony in grammatically precise mood has to be near top of the list. It usually means he's focused, clear-headed and very, very pissed.

Tony can be an idiot, can play an idiot better than anyone, but he is an extremely well educated, highly competent, ACTOR and Timmy knows it. The fact that he bought a house, that Tim went with him to all of the viewings, close to a dog park, with room for a study for Tim just shows tha he is in a committed relationship.

I am so happy. I love them together.

catwalksalone October 13 2009, 16:38:04 UTC

Thank you! And, yes, Tony is such a weird blend of surface and depth that even though Tim knows it it's hard to get a handle on. Communicate better, boys!

grammarwoman October 13 2009, 19:03:37 UTC

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! My cheeks are practically sore from grinning in delight.

"Got two kidneys but only one heart," he says. "It's not like I can give it to more than one person at once."

And you have my (fandom) heart! Oh, boys and their Issues! I'm so glad they get their happy ending. (And I totally know that Tim later whips out Consumer Reports with the best of food processors list and holds Tony to his promise. Tempt not a geek with gadgets and fail to deliver.)

Thank you for being such an enthusiastic and prolific Tim/Tony pusher!

catwalksalone October 13 2009, 20:14:46 UTC

Yay, thank you! I think maybe Tim will opt for the sex-with-Tony prize over the food processor. Though he could try to con him into both.