[oneshot] circus animals don't say no

Jun 24, 2006 12:39

Title: circus animals don't say no [oneshot]
Author: ccgensou
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13
Band: Alice Nine
Pairing: Hiroto/Shou
Summary: They were not supposed to feel, supposed to let go, supposed to oblige the world. But the fact still remains that even circus animals can feel.
Comment: It started with a random title and ended up like this. I have very ( Read more... )

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anonymous June 25 2006, 17:57:15 UTC
I really don't know what to say.
This was so beautiful and I just lost all of my words once again.

Thank you, darl!

Love, Emzi

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ccgensou June 26 2006, 03:40:33 UTC
Awh, you're too sweet. x3 Thank you! <3 *hugs*

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tokidokiko June 26 2006, 01:03:24 UTC
would I sound stupid it I admit that I dont get the metophor of ...circus animals don’t say no, they can still feel

though I still find this story incredibly beautiful and I love the line He will be my love-story, even if it will be my end.

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ccgensou June 26 2006, 03:37:06 UTC
No, you wouldn't sound stupid. xD It was difficult to elaborate because it'd ruin things, so I had to just hope that everyone'd understand. ^^; What it meant was that, you know circus animals, they don't talk, right? So they can't say no even though they'd want to (unless it's a parrot that's been trained to, I guess), and further more, if they express their will in another way, say, through violence, all they get is punishment. But they can still feel it, right? So Shou and Hiroto is in the circus of fame, and they're circus animals, so they can't express their love through words (and Hiroto can't say no if someone asks him if he loves Saga), but they can still feel it, right? ... ^^; Does that make sense? Sorry, it's 5.30 am and I just woke up. xD;;

Thank you very much. <3 8D *dorky smile*

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tokidokiko June 27 2006, 06:36:51 UTC
Yes, I really get it now.
Hearing that makes the story even for touch and heartbreaking.

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laydeekira June 26 2006, 22:38:56 UTC
Ohh...This was great... I can feel the [ain they were feeling as I read it.

GREAT JOB! ;o;

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ccgensou June 27 2006, 03:44:47 UTC
Hnn, thank you so much! ^^ <3 Awh. *dorky smile*

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laydeekira June 27 2006, 18:03:35 UTC
You're welcome~! ^_______________^;

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ryuuzaki_ June 29 2006, 01:42:43 UTC
;O; *cries*
awww!!! That was excelent!!

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ccgensou June 29 2006, 03:37:01 UTC
Nawwhh, thank you kindly! <3 x'3

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dollys_apology July 30 2006, 23:50:11 UTC

*grabs for tissues*

I'm emotional~! Leave me alone~! >.< !! *cries*

... but, really ... that was really well~written, Cokey~chan~! *huggles* Don't over~work yourself when you already have such talent, ne~? *kissu*

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ccgensou July 31 2006, 03:46:39 UTC
Ah~! *falls out of chair* Thank you~! <3 *hides red, blushing face in hands*

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