Fic: Jack´s vanity result and it´s consequences- Ianto/Jack - Doctor - PG15 - Torchwood

Aug 11, 2008 08:17

Title: Jack´s vanity result and it´s consequences ( Read more... )

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gracie_musica August 11 2008, 20:35:12 UTC
Oh that was beautiful at the end.

And Jack!Adipose = brilliant. And is especially funny since I'm currently reading Slow Decay, which is also about diet pills.

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celebrian_lotr August 12 2008, 02:40:57 UTC
Jack went all Emo at the end. Un-predicted twist! But welcomed nevertheless.

I read the title for that story, but never read it, I rarely ever read fanfic not to ´borrow´ ideas. X)

Couldn´t resist Jack Adipose, and I could see him doing something impulsive then going Ooops and all embarrassed LOL

I´m glad you liked it :)

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sarahjane6 August 11 2008, 23:35:18 UTC
Cute little Addie. Do I detect Jack might have another weight related issue on the horizon? Much mention of Ianto and parenting skills. Very nice, thank you.

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celebrian_lotr August 12 2008, 03:00:55 UTC
<3 Addie, she was a cute little Adipose.

Weeeeell I was going to go that way, have Jack having weight related issues, of ´that´ kind. But then the storyline ended up to be what you read.

I do have a SL for a pregnant Jack... thing is, I had three SLs with male pregnancy in mind! I thought I would write two instead of three LOL That is why Jack wasn´t pregnant in this one ;)

I´m glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for commenting :)

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felmyst August 11 2008, 23:49:29 UTC
that was so unexpected and fantastic..I have never read an adipose/torchwood xover before....I still want one....

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celebrian_lotr August 12 2008, 02:46:43 UTC
I want one too, they were SO cute! Wish they would make plushies, but even if they did I wouldn´t be able to buy it LOL

Still, it would be nice they did.

I´m glad you liked the story, thank you for the feedback :)

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tintop_lizzy August 12 2008, 01:36:11 UTC
Especially nice to see such a long story with so much character detail in it all the way through. Yes the Adipose is the best DW monster yet. I like its little hands too! Thanks for the fic, and please write more soon.

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celebrian_lotr August 12 2008, 02:50:56 UTC
I can´t seem to be able to write really short stories, so even my oneshots end up to be rather long X)

I think it was the most adorable monster we´ve seen! Running around and acting mischievous. I want one :D

I´m writing, I am trying to finish a long WIP now, but I might be start another oneshot too, who knows? ;)

Thank you for commenting!

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celebrian_lotr August 12 2008, 02:56:30 UTC
You can read and exercise at the same time? Now that´s something! I don´t think I could pull that out!

I´m glad you enjoyed it :)

I adore Adipose(s) I had to write something with them, they are just too cute. Couldn´t resist writing impulsive Jack and ending up with one LOL

Thank you for the feedback!

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