Fic: Jack´s vanity result and it´s consequences- Ianto/Jack - Doctor - PG15 - Torchwood

Aug 11, 2008 08:17

Title: Jack´s vanity result and it´s consequences ( Read more... )

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celebrian_lotr August 12 2008, 07:55:22 UTC
Well, they saw the Adipose for what it was, it was a baby, so- they had to take care of it as if it were a human baby, or a child :)

They can go all parental if needed. At least in my mind they can Heh.

I think, Ianto can be jealous of the Doctor, because of what he represents for Jack, but he also knows how much it would mean for Jack to do what he used to do when his Time Vortex Manipulator worked.

He loves Jack enough as to tell him, that if he ever has to leave, then he would be waiting for him. And Jack loves Ianto enough as to go back to him, they just needed to make it clear ´after´ meeting the doctor, because it was implied they talked about this before. Jack having to leave to save the world or just because he might be needed elsewhere.

It would be nice we saw Doctor/Jack/Ianto on the series, that would be really really cool, though I doubt it will ever happen :(

I´m glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you for commenting!

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celebrian_lotr August 13 2008, 04:41:06 UTC
Thank you :)

Glad you liked it.

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charlie_jae August 12 2008, 23:40:51 UTC
Awesome, it was sad to see Adie go. Oh but how funny it was to read how she came to be.

Only Jack's fat would drive Owen insane the way it did, lol.

The doctors arrival sparking what needed to be said between Ianto and Jack was good. Sweet!

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celebrian_lotr August 13 2008, 04:45:05 UTC
It was sad to see her go yes, but there was no way they could keep her. Plus she´ll be happy where she went.

*snickers* I couldn´t resist getting Jack to have those pills, I just HAD to XD

A baby made of fat with Jack´s personality and some of Ianto too, because it recognized him. Yeah- definitely driving Owen insane material LOL

I think the Doctor is the one person that might make them need re-assurance. In this case, both Ianto and Jack. They were both rather worried the other would leave for something ´better´

I´m glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you for the feedback :)

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blossomlegs August 13 2008, 04:19:55 UTC
So beautful,touching and lovely, bringing both a smile and tears. Thanks for shaaring!

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celebrian_lotr August 13 2008, 04:46:46 UTC
My pleasure :)

I´m glad you liked it!

Thank you for the feedback ;)

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thrace_adams August 17 2008, 04:50:41 UTC
Oh I really enjoyed this. We had the really cute stuff at the beginning and then all the wonderful romantic fluff at the end. Really well done.

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celebrian_lotr August 18 2008, 08:38:24 UTC
I´m glad you did :)

Yes, I have to admit I was a bit worried about the pacing of the story because it goes from extra fluff to a rather emotional couple scenes. But readers seemed to like it, so I am guessing it wasn´t such a brisk change.

Thank you for the feedback and letting me know you enjoyed it :)

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