Comments | celtic_flicka: VM Fic: I Hear the Bells (Veronica, Keith, Logan) PG-13

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VM Fic: I Hear the Bells (Veronica, Keith, Logan) PG-13

Dec 22, 2009 23:29

Title: I Hear the Bells ( Read more... )

veronica, logan, keith, fic, vm fic, veronica mars

Comments 45

stephanierb December 23 2009, 17:17:21 UTC

That was lovely. I too enjoyed the talk between Keith and Veronica; it's always nice to see Keith acknowledge that Logan is a basically good guy who had more than his fair share of trauma in his young life.

I liked the bell on Veronica's hat jingling as they kissed, and I especially liked that Logan opened the envelope right after Veronica left. So much for waiting until morning. I wonder what Veronica will say when she realizes he jumped the gun. :-)

Great job, as always. The perfect Christmas story.

celtic_flicka December 23 2009, 20:13:24 UTC

I especially liked that Logan opened the envelope right after Veronica left. So much for waiting until morning. I wonder what Veronica will say when she realizes he jumped the gun. :-)

If she really knows him, she probably wouldn't be surprised. :)

jesterlady December 23 2009, 18:11:00 UTC

Aww, he can sleep in his own bed again. very nice. Love it. Go Keith!

celtic_flicka December 23 2009, 20:14:05 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

spygrrl76 December 23 2009, 22:35:39 UTC

Awesome! While I loved the Logan and Veronica parts, I particularly appreciated Keith and Veronica's conversation. It's one I've been wanting to read in fanfic. I love Keith and all, but he definitely made mistakes too. Plus he didn't have a lot of important information.

A wonderful holiday story!

celtic_flicka December 24 2009, 01:24:51 UTC

I love Keith and all, but he definitely made mistakes too.

ITA. I think that when Alicia told him he was treating Veronica like she was much older than she was, she was 100% correct.

p2880 December 24 2009, 00:30:08 UTC

Sets just the right tone for fluffy Christmas fic! Thanks for this lovely story.

celtic_flicka December 24 2009, 01:23:05 UTC

You're welcome! :) Somehow, I've never written a Christmas VM fic before.

serendipityxxi December 24 2009, 04:33:55 UTC

Awww! That was adorable! “Santa doesn’t like sarcasm, Dad. That’s gonna get you a lump of coal in your stocking,” Veronica said with a huff. this was particularly in character! It was nice to see Keith liking Logan. and I loved the details like mentioning Wallace and Mac, Logan's blankets, Veronica's elf hat, they really brought the fic to life :)

celtic_flicka December 24 2009, 15:00:47 UTC

I love writing Keith and Veronica--so many opportunities for fun snark!

I'm glad you liked it.