Comments | celtic_flicka: VM Fic: The Things Guys Will Say... (Lilly/Piz, Logan/Veronica, Wallace, Mac) R

celtic_flicka

VM Fic: The Things Guys Will Say... (Lilly/Piz, Logan/Veronica, Wallace, Mac) R

Apr 25, 2010 15:47

Title: The Things Guys Will Say ( Read more... )

vmfic_gameon, wallace, veronica, logan/veronica, piz, logan, lilly, mac, no longer that girl, fic, veronica mars

Comments 29

glasheen25 April 25 2010, 21:08:25 UTC

Lilly and Piz are seriously hot:)

Love the AU. I haven't read many VM fics where Lilly is still alive, so that was interesting:)

Thank you for the very enjoyable read:)

celtic_flicka April 26 2010, 02:59:28 UTC

Thanks! The first story came from a discussion with an LJ friend about how Piz would have been a much better character if he'd had something else to do than just be interference for Logan and Veronica. I decided to give him a love interest and Lilly seemed to work.

Then I liked him that way, so I had to write a sequel. :)

hyperemmalawlz April 25 2010, 22:44:54 UTC

Aww; this is really sweet, and I like the whole Lilly/Piz idea. Good job!

celtic_flicka April 26 2010, 03:00:04 UTC

Thanks! It was just crazy enough to work. :)

isdon_isgood9 April 25 2010, 23:57:44 UTC

Ok so I haven't read it yet I just want to tell you how excited I am that you wrote this :)

Now I'm going to go and read it!

celtic_flicka April 26 2010, 03:03:23 UTC

LOL!

isdon_isgood9 April 26 2010, 05:01:18 UTC

Laugh all you like but I was serious.

And I totally love this. I like how Lilly feels confused about her feelings and that she did a total Veronica and ran away when she freaked. I also like that how Veronica and Logan ended up together, it made sense.

I hope you keep writing in this world you've created because you have gotten me addicted to Piz and Lilly!!

alee23 April 26 2010, 00:19:03 UTC

AWWW I absolutely LOVE this! And I'm, flattered that I kinda prompted this fic! :D Thanks so much for writing this!

I like that you set it a bit later on in the No Longer That Girl universe. I would have expected it as a prequel but this is SOOOO much better and the way you wrote it and explained how Lilly, Logan & Veronica got to the way they are without the use of flashbacks really impressed me.

I loved the Logan and Lilly scene and thought your explanation of how they came to be was very plausible and realistic.

Your Lilly/Piz are adorable and I would totally ship them! :D And on a more shallow note, I love that she convinced him to cut his hair! I can totally picture her taking charge - it seems like such a Lilly thing!

Great work! I LOVE it & will definitely be coming back to re-read this again! :D

(And I've realised I don't have a FabFour icon & that I really do need one! LoL)

celtic_flicka April 26 2010, 03:03:01 UTC

I originally was going to do a prequel, but I decided I liked L/P and wanted to write more of them, so it became flashbacks instead. Plus, I got the idea for the haircut scene when I saw a promo for Private Practice--Chris Lowell is so much cuter with the short hair!--so then I was able to put that in.

I actually have an idea for another sequel to this, but it's going to take place over Christmas break so I need to hold onto it for a little while... unless I can figure out a way to make it work for summer break... :)

alee23 April 28 2010, 13:13:09 UTC

He does look great in PP with his shorter do!

Ooh sequel! Awesome! I can't wait! :D

havemy_heart April 26 2010, 02:41:59 UTC

First time *ever* that I've liked Piz. And I really loved Lilly in this, which is saying a lot.

I love how Lilly has matured and realized how much she hurt everyone that she loves. I'm also glad that she got her head out of her ass with Logan's help and is realizing she's a good person.

celtic_flicka April 26 2010, 03:05:32 UTC

Thanks--I wanted to make her a little wiser from her experience but still keep her essential Lilly-ness, so I'm glad it worked for you!