Comments | celtic_flicka: Leverage fic: The Meaning of Pancakes (Eliot and the team) PG-13

celtic_flicka

Leverage fic: The Meaning of Pancakes (Eliot and the team) PG-13

Jul 08, 2010 15:41

Title: The Meaning of Pancakes ( Read more... )

parker, sophie, leverage, nate, hardison, eliot, fic

Comments 48

bprice6 July 10 2010, 18:46:41 UTC

I have to agree with deepbluemermaid; I love hurt/comfort when it's done well and this was a great story! As much as Eliot protests to the contrary, I know he craves human contact & concern deep down and you captured that beautifully.

celtic_flicka July 10 2010, 20:54:57 UTC

I know he craves human contact & concern deep down

I totally agree, and after the last few eps, I'm getting the feeling that the show is going to address that a little more. I think Eliot's feeling taken for granted, and he's not able to pretend it doesn't bother him anymore.

Thanks for your nice comments!

anntarot July 12 2010, 10:41:15 UTC

well done, blue slushie v blood = even LOL loved that part.

celtic_flicka July 12 2010, 16:08:09 UTC

Thanks! I actually went back and checked that scene in "The 12-Step Job" to makes sure I had the slushie color right. :)

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celtic_flicka July 13 2010, 20:47:40 UTC

Thanks! Eliot-Parker-Hardison team stuff is my favorite. :)

kitiaria July 15 2010, 20:55:42 UTC

That was fab! I just loved it! It makes me want more!!!! :D

celtic_flicka July 15 2010, 21:54:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

fleurlb July 21 2010, 17:46:16 UTC

Finally getting a chance to catch up. I loved this even more reading it a second time. All the interactions were perfect and I really liked Eliot's thought process.

celtic_flicka July 21 2010, 22:13:27 UTC

Thanks! Writing this made Eliot!fic take over my brain, I think.