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elebridith July 27 2010, 19:53:24 UTC
Oh, this was wonderful! Great voices and great story. Lovely details too - slushie, reddiwhip... and that the whole team stayed. Bravo!

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celtic_flicka July 27 2010, 21:14:08 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the details, because I had fun writing them in. ;)

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cat_77 August 1 2010, 01:29:13 UTC
Loved it! The whole team looking out for him and taking care of him - wonderful!

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celtic_flicka August 1 2010, 13:46:28 UTC
Eliot needs someone to take care of him. (Sadly, it can't be me...)

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deaniebtvs August 30 2010, 04:49:05 UTC
Poor Eliot, always getting hurt. I loved the interaction between him and Parker in the beginning...and the way the team rallied around to take care of him is the icing on the cake :) Great story.

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celtic_flicka August 30 2010, 13:29:43 UTC
Thanks! I think that Parker is the biggest badass on the team, after Eliot, so I knew it had to be her to save him. :)

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jello_o October 10 2010, 00:06:20 UTC
This was an excellent teamfic. For the record, all those topping sound delicious.

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celtic_flicka October 10 2010, 03:54:13 UTC
I also like the Redd-Whip straight out of the can. :)

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!

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celtic_flicka October 30 2010, 14:10:52 UTC
Glad I could help cheer you up. :)

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