If you have any concrit n the way I play Kero, please tell me that here!

Just a note for people so they can keep this in mind before they give concrit. I'm playing Kero as if from the ENGLISH ANIME, so keep that in mind cause his personality and speech pattern is slightly different in the English version. Thanks~

[This guy is drifting lazily through open doors and windows of the apartments looking for food. He's hungry and he doesn't care if it isn't his food. Feel free to notice him in the halls, outside your windows, in your apartment, where ever really.]

Sakuraaaaaaa!

....

Where is she? I don't recognize this place at all. Did she create this with a card or something? I can feel magic everywhere here. Man this is so weird.

[sound of a stomach rumbling]

Aoooo. I need something to eat. I wish I had some of Tomoyo's cakes!