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ceslas

Turn

Aug 28, 2007 01:51

Title: Turn
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Post-BDM
Word Count: 100
Characters: Simon/Kaylee
Disclaimer: Firefly owns me, I own words
Notes: As always
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finding, firefly 100, simon/kaylee

Comments 30

open_embrace August 28 2007, 08:10:19 UTC

oh, very nice!

i love the simplicity, and i love the characterisation in the dialogue. You know exactly who's speaking, right from the start.

great work :)

ceslas August 29 2007, 04:25:15 UTC

Thank you. I don't get to talk with those two often, so it is nice when they are clear...

razycrandomgirl August 28 2007, 12:03:06 UTC

Awww. it fits.

ceslas August 29 2007, 04:28:45 UTC

*Scuffs toes* Thanks darlin', weren't easy...

razycrandomgirl August 30 2007, 03:22:18 UTC

but you made it look so. :-)

ceslas August 30 2007, 03:26:35 UTC

*Keeps a grip on the scruff of both their necks* They will talk when ya don't give 'em another choice...

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ubiquirk August 28 2007, 12:54:16 UTC

Nicely done! Simon sticks his foot in his mouth - again - all while not meaning to.

ceslas August 29 2007, 04:30:53 UTC

Kinda think that might be why Kaylee likes him sometimes- he is just so adorkable....

isha_libran August 28 2007, 19:12:53 UTC

Hmm. I like this. Especially the way Kaylee refutes Simon with the 'silly Core saying bit'. Because it's true.

Also, Simon gets his foot in his mouth again! Hee. The boob, as River would say. =)

Also, lovely font! How'd you add it to your lj? *is curious*

Also also, long time, no see! *hugs* I dropped out of lj for a while, sorry.

ceslas August 29 2007, 04:36:09 UTC

hi!!! *Waves cheerfully*! Miss seeing you around these parts... and well, my usual work is, well, not fluffy >;0)

Simon is adorkable no doubt about it. Kaylee is such a doll for him. Perfect really...

Ahh, the font! My signature font and color if I can manage it; 'copy-paste' from Word, a little creative twiddling with Rich Text and HTML and voila!

romanceguru August 28 2007, 22:19:37 UTC

Oooooh, Simon & Kaylee! For some reason, I see very little of them.

Simon, Simon, Simon. Always fretting over River! Think you've capture their dynamic perfectly. : )

ceslas August 29 2007, 04:41:32 UTC

Conjure it might be because they make our teeth hurt with the sweetness of them >;0)

That said, Simon and his love and caring for River is so the White Knight...

Thank you for the kudos! (I know the font makes your eyes wibbly- fortunately the 100 worders aren't as bad I reckon... Hope to be uploading a few more of the series to Fanfiction.net soonish though...)