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ceslas

Bank

Aug 30, 2007 13:17

Title: Bank
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Post-BDM
Word Count: 100
Characters: Serenity, implied Inara
Disclaimer: Firefly owns me, I own words
Notes: As always
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finding, firefly 100, inara, serenity

Comments 24

silentpheonix August 30 2007, 17:22:02 UTC

Oooh, I'm all kindsa curious now. Where are they going and why?

ceslas August 30 2007, 17:31:12 UTC

OMG woman! Do you just have radar for stories being posted! FIVE minutes! That's how long this was up...wow.

Interestingly, this was an insert piece that is just giving backstory info on who is piloting and why... well, the why hasn't yet come out, but it will- promise!

silentpheonix August 30 2007, 18:36:05 UTC

Er, no radar. Just a job that isn't giving me anything to do right now. :D That and I read fast. <.< >.>

ceslas August 31 2007, 01:27:51 UTC

lolm but you had to be online! and looking! Seriously, my ego just loves it. Thanks!

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isha_libran August 30 2007, 19:26:49 UTC

Hmm. I like this. And now I wanna know what's happening, too!

ceslas August 31 2007, 01:26:21 UTC

Great... I will have to get going on that! lol

Thanks for the push!

ever_obsessed August 31 2007, 01:46:19 UTC

Ooh, there's something sensual beneath all the words here, something... not quite sexual exactly, but deeply intimate, something strong and comfortable, if that makes any sense. And then the contrast of noise against noise somehow working to achieve a flawed kind of silence?

I love Inara almost as much as I do River, but, um, you probably know that already, and I love when people get to examine any connections between her and the ship, and now I'm all giddy because I so want to know how did they get here and what the hell is going on.

*pokes a bit*

I'm so ashamed - when was the last time I gave you first comment?

ceslas August 31 2007, 01:59:26 UTC

Oh darlin', being first is not as important as what is noticed.

Inara and Serenity are both sensual creatures and trying to explore what I think is a logical connection has interesting potentials.

Flawed silence is it weird that I think of several relationships on Serenity as having that characteristic?

ever_obsessed August 31 2007, 04:07:43 UTC

is it weird that I think of several relationships on Serenity as having that characteristic?

Believe me when I say, no.

ceslas August 31 2007, 04:09:24 UTC

Excellent... Cause they are so clear in my lind, so vocal in their noise and passion...

razycrandomgirl August 31 2007, 03:30:57 UTC

Something in the other comments made me think that this didn't have to be who I originally thought it might have been. That made me smile.

Then I thought about Wash and how he could fly like no ones business. I LOVE THAT MAN ... :-(

ceslas August 31 2007, 04:14:13 UTC

We all love him, he had a specialness about him. I think his passion for flying invested Serenity with a soul that everyone felt. Well, him and Kaylee's unbounded love, Mal's spirit of survival, Zoe's strength, Jayne's rawness... It made her home...

romanceguru August 31 2007, 23:40:23 UTC

Ummm…Inara as Serenity’s pilot.I really like that idea. It’s funny how I never even considerate it before.

I love the delicateness to this, that’s exactly how’d she fly!

ceslas September 1 2007, 02:35:57 UTC

It has been on my mind for a long time and it was the logical choice. River is not the uber-woman that many see her as and she most definitely cannot be in two places as once. So, they need a pilot and piloting is often more suited to women than men due to exactly that grace that Inara brings to it.

Thank you for noticing the delicateness! It was fun trying to show the harmony of two beautiful birds >:0)