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"For Choices" Chpt 4 (Gilmore Girls)

Sep 12, 2009 00:14

Here you are! We are skipping some time when the next chapter begins...you'll probably gather where I'll be skipping to as you read. ;) Enjoy! And please do review; it helps so much and I love you all. Thanks! :)

( Chapter 4 )

gilmore girls, fanfic, for choices

Comments 6

faye_dartmouth September 12 2009, 14:52:47 UTC

Deeeeeeeeeean.

He has an almost girlfriend? Lucky girl! I like that Rory is jealous even when she doesn't quite know why.

Your Luke and Lorelai are adorable.

I hate Jess. I am trying but he's just JESS.

Oh, Rory. I look forward to when you FINALLY grow up.

cgf_kat September 12 2009, 15:05:36 UTC

LOL I take no offense. You are perfectly free to hate Jess. The way he turned out 'sort of' redeemed him, but besides that I've always hated him too. Don't worry; I need a little bit more of him in the next chapter, and after that there will be much less for a while, I think. Not telling more than that, lol. :) As for Luke and Lorelai, I'm glad you like them. I wanted them to be fun but not out of character, and even though this is mostly a Rory-centric story I do have a bit of an arc for them planned. Because I had to squeeze more for them in there somewhere because I love them to death ( ... )

jessm78 September 13 2009, 03:02:27 UTC

Deeeeeeeean!!! :D I am having such a good time visualizing him all grown up and filled out and pretty like Suit!Sam in some of the season 4 episodes. *grin* Things would totally be awkward for them, after the way they parted and how long it's been since they last saw each other. I like that bit of jealousy Rory's obviously feeling when Dean mentions possibly having a relationship. It's obvious she misses seeing him and having him around, and you portray that well. Please tell me this isn't the last we'll see of Dean for a while? Pretty please?

Luke and Lorelai... so cute :)

You've kinda redeemed Jess a bit for me, even though I'm still no fan of his.

I think I can guess where you're skipping to... hope I don't have to wait to long to find out if I'm close! ;) Great job as always!

cgf_kat September 13 2009, 03:18:28 UTC

Thanks! I hope you won't have to wait long, too. That'll depend on school. Ugh. I have a College Alegebra test this Wednesday night, so...oi. But i'll get the next chapter out as fast as I can. :) I know you and faye are impatient women who want your Dean! LOL :P I need my Dean too; it 'is' fun to think of him looking like S4/5 Sam, now ain't it? ;) Take THAT Rory Gilmore.

jessm78 September 14 2009, 02:46:22 UTC

No prob. :) Ooh, that's right... no pressure, then. And good luck on the test! LOL, I've always gotta have my Dean fix! Hee, it really is fun to picture him like that. Oh, Rory, you have no idea what you're missing. ;)

sendintheklowns September 21 2009, 02:07:35 UTC

Rory, no...Jess isn't the one for you. You might want to take another look at your first love. *crosses fingers*

I can so see Dean slipping in to see Lorelai get married. I always thought they had a sweet connection.