(Untitled)

[channelingprana]

Synopsis: A man looses everything- his family, his job, his house and his car due to an uncontrollable cocaine addiction. He wanders around downtown New York for years living off of scrap and collecting change. One night he becomes suicidal and decides to walk to the jersey shore where he was raised before ending his life. He jumps into the water,

Comments

[trace_a_square]

thats pretty nifty... did you write that urself?
why dont you like that?

[channelingprana]

yea i wrote it, i don't like it cause it sounds cliche and amatuerish to me. but that sells sometimes. i mean i think it's good. but i think it could be better.