{fic} White Lies - Chapter 5

Oct 07, 2010 16:16

Title: White Lies
Author: charcoaldonkey  
Pairing: OhnoxNino (with a little JunxAiba)
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13 (for now.. hehe)
Summary: "The rain beat down harder and Ohno looked like he’d been shot. He fell to his knees and ran his hands through his hair as tears spilled down his cheeks. “Nino…” He whispered, “Please… don’t do this.”

White Lies - Chapter 5 )

l: chaptered, r: pg-, p: junxaiba, b: arashi, g: angst, p: ohnoxnino

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yumi_usagi October 7 2010, 19:36:13 UTC
So sad :(( I know the breaking up part will happen sooner or later but it's still heart-breaking while reading it :(( And the rain indeed made that scene beautiful.
Thanks for fast update! Waiting for next one.

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charcoaldonkey October 8 2010, 01:12:32 UTC
Thank you~ ^.^
Yes I really like this scene, that's why i held onto it so long even though i had nothing to put it in >.<
The next update may take a few days though, Gomen!
But it will be very long and include some smexy times so I hope it's worth the wait ^_^

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anesato October 7 2010, 20:36:44 UTC
:((((( sadddddd I want cry now, that all;//

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charcoaldonkey October 8 2010, 01:18:07 UTC
Oh noo~ *huggles*
Don't cry, dear reader!! >.<
I love writing angst yet i feel so Bad when it makes people upset?
I believe i've gone round the loop >.<
Thanks for commenting~!

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sharmidev October 7 2010, 21:51:04 UTC
awww that was soo sad. reminds me of hana your dango when makino leaves him. =( please get them out of this misery. no one is happy.

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charcoaldonkey October 8 2010, 01:22:28 UTC
Aw thanks~!
I love Hana Yori Dango, especially the second season? Phwaaoor Matsujun was Gorgeous, ne? >.<
And i agree, this is quite the depressing story... in which all the Arashi members (possibly THE most happiest/mentally insane people in the world) are crying every five minutes and are sadder than a bag of wet cats. Good grief.
Hopefully they'll work it out in the end though ^.^

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sharmidev October 9 2010, 11:33:22 UTC
totally loved season two too!! loved one too but favorite scene is when matsujun losses his memory but still chases after makino to save her from the blizzard. he freaking jumped over couches!! love that scene. that is what made me start listening to Arashi. i was totally jun-bait. but since being introduced to all the members. i found my true love in aiba. =)

another thing i agree on is that Arashi are the happiest mentally insane people on ever to exist on this earth. that is why they bring us sooooooooo much happiness. =)!!

and yes please make them work it out!!!!

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arashistyle October 8 2010, 00:25:06 UTC
So sad...
So short...
Waiting for more...
I want to find hope, their love is too big to end up like this!

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charcoaldonkey October 8 2010, 01:26:49 UTC
I agree~! >.<
Ohmiya is forever, Nothing can keep them apart!!! *waves imaginary flag of ohmiya*
And the next chappie is definitely going to be a long one, (although it Will take longer to update) and will also have an R-rated scene O.O *grins evilly*
So hopefully that's something to look forward to >.<
Thanks for commenting~!

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rio_sora October 8 2010, 03:28:06 UTC
super sad! T_T huhu, the rain make it sadder,
thanks for update! :DDD

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charcoaldonkey October 8 2010, 18:44:47 UTC
Aw thanks~!
The next update will be in a few days or so ^.^
Thank you for commenting~

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