{fic} White Lies - Chapter 5

Oct 07, 2010 16:16

Title: White Lies
Author: charcoaldonkey  
Pairing: OhnoxNino (with a little JunxAiba)
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13 (for now.. hehe)
Summary: "The rain beat down harder and Ohno looked like he’d been shot. He fell to his knees and ran his hands through his hair as tears spilled down his cheeks. “Nino…” He whispered, “Please… don’t do this.”

White Lies - Chapter 5 )

l: chaptered, r: pg-, p: junxaiba, b: arashi, g: angst, p: ohnoxnino

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featherohno October 8 2010, 04:38:58 UTC
Johnny baka!!! I hate him...nino,why? *runs n hug riida*
it was so sad...:( *crying*
somehow ,i can feel what riida feel...*crying again*
i hate when they breakup..my world is not colourful again..
next chapter..onegai!
*still crying*

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charcoaldonkey October 8 2010, 18:47:51 UTC
Don't cry~ *Hands tissue*
And don't worry~ *runs for box of crayons* Things will get colorful again soon~
Thank you for commenting! ^.^

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crimson_song October 8 2010, 05:38:15 UTC
That is so sad... T^T
Poor Nino... Poor Ohno... D:
Thanks for updating! Somehow I like angst too... :3

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charcoaldonkey October 8 2010, 18:49:05 UTC
Yay! ^.^
This story is so Filled with it though, it's just angst angst angst
I think i may have angst-overdosed >.<
Thanks for commenting~~

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soraohno October 8 2010, 08:44:31 UTC
Ops....

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charcoaldonkey October 8 2010, 18:52:16 UTC
Ehhh? ^.^
Not sure what that means~ demo on a completely random note I absolutely Adore your display picture >.<
Is that Aiba? Good grief I can't see who it is! I may be going blind O.O

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soraohno October 8 2010, 19:52:19 UTC
EH?! No =D It's Tegoshi Yuya. From NEWS/ Tegomass. Do you only know Arashi?

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charcoaldonkey October 8 2010, 20:09:24 UTC
Hahahaha Haai! ><
Well, they're the only johnny's boyband i listen to ;P
I know other JE boys from different shows they've acted in though ^.^
Demo he's very kawaaii ne? >.

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datz_20 October 8 2010, 14:09:34 UTC
a very very sad chapter..
hope the next one will be happy chapter...hehe

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charcoaldonkey October 8 2010, 18:55:31 UTC
>.< Gomen, I can't promise it will be,
It's got a different kind of angst though.. I'd categorize it as more of a 'hurt' than angst?
Je ne sais pas
Hopefully it will liven things up a bit before the end, ne?
Thanks for commenting~~

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itsumo_niji October 8 2010, 14:22:20 UTC
okay this one made me cry...
i cant believe how nino's heart can hold on...
please update soon

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itsumo_niji October 8 2010, 14:23:40 UTC
p.s:forgot to say your writing style is fantastic <3

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charcoaldonkey October 8 2010, 18:58:31 UTC
Uwaaah thank you~ ^.^
And honestly, I can't believe he can hold on either >.< It would be so Hard!
And hai hai I'll be updating in a few days, ^_^
This chap was actually the Last "from the past" scene :D
It's coming to an end soon~ T_T
Thanks for commenting~

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