{fic} White Lies - Chapter 5

[charcoaldonkey]

Title: White Lies
Author: charcoaldonkey  
Pairing: OhnoxNino (with a little JunxAiba)
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13 (for now.. hehe)
Summary: "The rain beat down harder and Ohno looked like he’d been shot. He fell to his knees and ran his hands through his hair as tears spilled down his cheeks. “Nino…” He whispered, “Please… don’t do this.”

Comments

[vietnga]

I love it, seriously love it, especially the last part when Nino had to hold his feeling back. That's just so Nino-like, keeping everything just for himself and getting through everything just by himself ;__;. And the rain, the rain made that scene even more perfect. It's heartbreaking, I admit, but it's perfect for a breaking up scene :D.

And again, I love those last sentences ♥♥. Waiting for the next neh ^^