Comments | charleswhatnow: fic post: we who elude restoration (Hotch/Prentiss)

charleswhatnow

fic post: we who elude restoration (Hotch/Prentiss)

Oct 31, 2011 21:17

Title: we who elude restoration
Characters: Emily Prentiss, Aaron Hotchner
Rating: pg-13
Summary: They’ve got similarities now that no one should have.
Author’s Note: word count - 1,095. Spoilers Lauren (6x18) through season 7.

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criminal minds, fanfic

Comments 11

magisterequitum November 1 2011, 01:23:49 UTC

AHHH! I really really really REALLY love this, Deb.

Holy shit, you do so much here. And their similarities, but not yet a matching set. I LOVE IT.

charleswhatnow November 1 2011, 01:39:38 UTC

eeep. Thank you, Jordan!

I just love these two so much. It seems like we're not going to have any significant emphasis put on Prentiss dealing with things for a few episodes, and I need it.

doctaj10 November 1 2011, 01:30:08 UTC

Its easy to see how an unspoken comfort scenario would play out between them and you wrote it beautifully. Your understanding of the characters makes this fic really enjoyable :)

charleswhatnow November 1 2011, 01:40:54 UTC

ah, thank you! I always try to make sure they things they say/do are things that fit the characters. I'm really glad they you think they do! Thanks again :)

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charleswhatnow November 1 2011, 03:05:57 UTC

ahhh, thank you LaT! I'm super glad I'm not the only one thinking about this because I have so many feelings about her opening up to him and finally starting to try and work through some of these things. thank you :)

just_jasper November 1 2011, 02:15:10 UTC

This is wonderful, tense. They're such an angsty pair.

charleswhatnow November 1 2011, 03:07:32 UTC

Thanks Jasper!

and argh, they are!

thecitylove November 1 2011, 03:10:28 UTC

As usual you are my hero. I love this one especially A LOT.

Especially the literal hand holding while she talks about her experience. Idk that just fits so perfectly to me.

charleswhatnow November 1 2011, 03:21:45 UTC

Lydia, thank you! :3

I wanted to find some way for them to have a physical closeness during the talks. And I thought that him trying to show her that she doesn't have to rely on picking at her nails as a physical outlet for her apprehension would be a nice way to do that. that's still somewhat believable for them.