Comments | chazper: Best Forgotten: A fic for Brandy (pt. 1)

chazper

Best Forgotten: A fic for Brandy (pt. 1)

Feb 13, 2009 12:41

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, BRANDY!

This is the kind of story that you do so well and I do not at all. But you wanted to read A nurse in a mental hospital discovers that a well-known missing person is being held there against their will. so just for you, here's a variation on that prompt. Of course, it's a WIP, and since I have about four of those already ( Read more... )

best forgotten

Comments 39

zbyszko February 13 2009, 21:56:09 UTC

I was hoping someone would write this- and what a great start!

chazper February 14 2009, 14:50:42 UTC

Thank you. I credit/blame Brandy!

marsalka February 14 2009, 00:08:39 UTC

evil evil Caleb. But that nurse will save Ryan and Caleb will get his (right? crosses fingers)

chazper February 15 2009, 21:42:56 UTC

Caleb will get his what? *she asked innocently* But don't worry: somebody will help Ryan . . . eventually.

beachtree February 14 2009, 00:33:29 UTC

Talk about a nightmare come to life... Poor Ryan would have preferred any of his unconscious trips down memory lane to opening his eyes and being slammed with this twisted reality ( ... )

chazper February 15 2009, 21:49:16 UTC

I can write evil Caleb, beach, but I don't think I can write evil Kiki--or even distant Kirsten, despite the fact that TPTB put her onscreen so often. So don't worry. Sandy and Kirsten will both be in parental mode, trust me. There has to be some balance to this maniacal Caleb!

beachtree February 16 2009, 06:30:35 UTC

Yes, you can write irrationally obsessed/fixated, cruel Caleb with his singular focus on demonizing, vilifying and hurting an innocent kid with no ulterior motives. Ah, the Caleb-colored glasses of paranoid and judgmental distortion... Oh, doctor...?

It's a relief to know that S3 Sandy (Who WAS that?) won't be in evidence and that canon!Kirsten will again be replaced by her far more humane, less distant and cold ff version. Her screen/show persona was so sadly lacking and disappointing. That self would be all the more heartbreaking here.

As for the nurse, maybe she'll have something in her head and in her heart that motivates her to do the right thing. Nothing like a nightmare of epic proportions with no escape- neither in an unconscious nor conscious state.

nullsys February 14 2009, 02:57:59 UTC

To me this seems like the worst suffering someone let endure Ryan so far - physical pain is one thing, but having all your believes questioned - I can't and won't even start to imagine that
Still an interesting fic - looking forward to the next part.

chazper February 15 2009, 21:51:13 UTC

The worst suffering? Really? Eep--that's pretty scary considering the torture Ryan's been through in fanfic! I'll try not to strand him in the mental hospital too long.

nullsys February 15 2009, 23:57:12 UTC

I know that Ryan gets tortured a lot in various fanfics, but even if I (luckily) can't speak from experience, I see it like the following ( ... )

alluxera February 14 2009, 17:11:28 UTC

Wow, this must be a nightmare for Ryan. Strapped down, drugged up and feeling completely alone.
His calling out for Sandy, oh my....
But there will be a good end, right? Right!

chazper February 15 2009, 21:45:30 UTC

Wow, this must be a nightmare for Ryan. Strapped down, drugged up and feeling completely alone.

Blame our brandy! She's the one who came up with the prompt. This is all her fault. As for a good end . . . well, I'll try!