Best Forgotten, a fic for Brandy (pt. 4 of ?)

[chazper]

Sigh. It's lonely here in OC fic-writing land. So little company makes it hard to get inspired.

Okay, whine over. And you know the disclaimers, right? Characters (well, the main ones anyway) not mine, no profit made, etc., etc. So here's part 4 of my increasingly AU fic. Happy--or rather, unhappy--reading.

Best Forgotten, Part 4

Comments

[fifimom]

Wonderful update. Thanks so much.

[chazper]

You're welcome. And thank you for reading :)

[anonymous]

evil Caleb, scary Dr. Keller! I am on the edge of my seat, waiting for Lucy or Charley to figure it all out and rescue Ryan...

[chazper]

Glad you're enjoying this (sort of, anyway!)

[marsalka]

evil Caleb, scary Dr. Keller! I am on the edge of my seat, waiting for Lucy or Charley to figure it all out and rescue Ryan...

[chazper]

Now wait. What makes you think that's going to happen? (*gives an evil Caleb grin*)

[loracj]

Ack. Cal is determined to have things his way. But at least Sandy and his furrowed brows know better.

[chazper]

Well, of course! The furrowed brows always know best. But are they mighty enough to defeat crafty Cal? Hmm . . . hard to say.

[oc_gambit2]

Ah, those magnificent Sandy Cohen brows- you built the suspense nicely to Charlie's arrival. I was just beginning to have some certainty where you were headed. And I like her style. I think in thirties 'film noir' style, we'd say she had 'moxie'. Yeah. Can't wait to see Charlie kick butt

[chazper]

Aw, a Lab mix puppy! Yes, you do have your hands full, but so worth it. Meanwhile, your 9-10 weeks delay isn't even close to how long a couple of my WIPs have been languishing, so don't feel guilty. Whenever you post, it will be good.

As for this story: thanks so much for your kind comments. And yes, Charlie definitely has moxie, in any era!