Best Forgotten, a fic for Brandy (pt. 4 of ?)

[chazper]

Sigh. It's lonely here in OC fic-writing land. So little company makes it hard to get inspired.

Okay, whine over. And you know the disclaimers, right? Characters (well, the main ones anyway) not mine, no profit made, etc., etc. So here's part 4 of my increasingly AU fic. Happy--or rather, unhappy--reading.

Best Forgotten, Part 4

Comments

[katwoman76]

Thank you for the update.

Thank you for having Sandy not just falling for Caleb's plans, but investigating himself.
And I can understand, why he would do it without telling Kirsten.
Even if she does want to find Ryan, and I'm glad she made that clear to her dad as well, she is also easier to influence than her boys. Getting her to accept that her dad would go to such lengths to get them to stop searching is something she might not be willing to accept and there is the chance she would let something slip. I do hope, it's not the case though.

Day after tomorrow?? Lucy better start actions. That so-called doctor should NOT have a chance to experiment on our Woobie.
Pretty please. We need Super-Sandy to the rescue, before evil Doc really turns him into "Brendon".
I can not deal with that kind of damage to the Woobie and I fear, whatever Keller has planned would not be easily reversed.
So please please please, get Ryan out of there in, before it's too late.

[mirella67]

Loved it! Nice, meaty chapter. This is so suspenseful; I'm glad you're continuing to update.

[smc36]

I'm so glad you didn't give up on this!

Good for you! It's wonderfully evilly great!

[famous99]

Wonderful update. Love how Sandy doubted Caleb.
And Kirsten sort of irritated me after she heard the news about Ryan. She became the S3 simpering Kirsten!

[60schic]

Oh chaz...you're killing me! Every time I read one of your updates, my stomach twists in knots, and that is a testament to the superior quality of your writing. Your attention to detail just sucks me in every time. There's not a wrong note anywhere.

Yay for Sandy's suspicions of dad-in-law. Go for it, Charlie!!! For sure, she'll follow him to Mexico...right?

Your Seth is so very spot on that I can feel his restless energy. In fact, ALL of your characters are true to canon. Makes me bloody hate Cal all over again. Thank you for giving Kirsten the semblance of a backbone. And pleez to be keeping the big mouth of Seth shut.

My dear---you are forbidden from abandoning this fic! More more more!!!!!