Best Forgotten, a Fic for Brandy, Pt. 9

[chazper]

More like a Halloween trick than a treat, this update.

I've had little time to write recently and even less inspiration, but I wanted to post at least a mini-update before the month ended. So here it is, mini indeed. In every way.

DisclaimerStill AU (oh, that nasty Caleb!), and the characters? Still not mine.

Best Forgotten, Part 9

Comments

[jujuberry136]

Seth and Sandy on the case- yay!

[chazper]

It's about time isn't it?

[beachtree]

I'm sliding under the wire to read before November, too.

Glad to see Charlie has always had brains and common sense and that Sandy seems to have begged, borrowed or stolen to have put a down payment on a clue. The exchange between Sandy and Seth hints at doubts they both have about Kirsten's feelings, loyalties and choices. Her history and current actions would indicate that strength, clarity and honesty haven't been her strong suits. Some people are just real slow on the uptake- and unwilling to face the truth no matter how often confronted with the evidence. Ah, to never want to consider anything remotely unpleasant and embrace the fantasy world as it's handed all tied with a bow...

Here's to Caleb being as careless and conceited with covering his tracks as he has been in his approach and to Sandy not suffering a relapse. Time's a-wastin'!

Thanks for updating!

[chazper]

You're welcome. ". . . begged, borrowed or stolen to put a down payment on a clue" made me laugh. And you're right: time's a-wastin'!

[fredsmith518]

Something in Sandy’s face melted. Clapping a hand on his son’s shoulder, he bent his forehead to touch Seth’s. lovely picture

very much liked Kirsten's back thoughts making her doubt Caleb

Ryan was part of a drug deal in Mexico, and he wasn’t spotted near the Texas border. missing a wasn't?

[chazper]

Thanks fred. I was very fond of the image you noted myself. Thanks too for the proofreading alert. I am indeed missing a "wasn't". Must correct that right now!

[katwoman76]

thanks for the update.
yes, it was short, but needed. the cohen-boys are on the case and even kirsten finally starts to doubt her dad.
now they better hurry to find out the truth so that they can finally get ryan out.

[chazper]

You mean before he's not Ryan anymore? Yep, they'd better hurry--and I guess that means I'd better write!

[katwoman76]

You mean before he's not Ryan anymore?
Yes! Yes! And did I mention yes?

[chazper]

Hee. You're quick, kat! And I'm working on a Lucy-Ryan scene right now. (Well, Lucy-Brandon/Ryan; poor girl's not quite sure yet.)

[chicletinho]

I'm so happy with the update! Glad Kirsten is "waking up" about Caleb.
I was afraid you had forgotten all about this story... thank you so much! :)

[chazper]

You're welcome! (Sorry it took so long to say it. I've been busy, but I haven't forgotten about this story. You may only see updates once a month, but I will finish it, promise!)