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chazper

Best Forgotten, Part 20.

Oct 31, 2010 13:00

Trick or treat. You decide. Anyway, just in time for Halloween, here's this month's chapter of my AU OC horror story. But sorry, no zombies here. And yes, I'm still borrowing the characters Josh.

Best Forgotten, Part 20
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chazper November 2 2010, 23:30:01 UTC

anyone who's been to the Yucatan or any part of Mexico knows how unreliable building fixtures, technology and power supplies are. How much time do they have?

Wait, have you read the next chapter, beach? Never mind, I'm not saying another word. (*zips lips shut*)

beachtree October 31 2010, 18:58:43 UTC

That is truly cruel and evil. Maybe only Halloween excuses it and the Cohen family road trip. There's no excuse for Caleb who is evil incarnate, and Dr. Killer, the worst kind of abuser of his profession. As part of this sightseeing tour, are you sure the Cohens aren't going to stop for lunch, some local crafts, maybe pick up a pinata to waste a few more hours, then go snorkeling? Did they turn off the phone so they wouldn't have their conversations and jokes interrupted? Ouch ( ... )

chazper November 2 2010, 23:31:52 UTC

Oops--the reply above belongs here!

beachtree November 3 2010, 01:25:22 UTC

That would be my fault. The 'puter wasn't playing nicely in the sandbox, so I had to edit. It almost posted 3 times- or not at all.

No, I haven't managed to hack into your next chapter. Hola, I depend on an IT department for most things! You flatter me. (But I do speak from experience, although I never did cross paths with the Cohens while they drove around and around and around...)

melster294 October 31 2010, 19:40:01 UTC

OOOh very treaty at first then dastardly tricky at the end !! Thanks for posting - you are the cliffhanger queen !!

chazper November 2 2010, 23:32:51 UTC

Aw, I've always wanted to be royalty. Thanks!

zbyszko October 31 2010, 20:44:44 UTC

Yay! I was hoping to get a Halloween treat today and here it is! But I hope that phone rings again before Seth hits that off button. : )

chazper November 2 2010, 23:34:22 UTC

I'm so glad you thought this was a treat. But as for the phone, how do you know it wouldn't just be a wrong number?

fredsmith518 October 31 2010, 20:54:48 UTC

oh, eep!
edge of the seat reading, thank you!

chazper November 2 2010, 23:36:06 UTC

You're welcome! Hope all is well in your part of the world. Gorgeous icon, btw!

fredsmith518 November 16 2010, 19:21:27 UTC

thank you, went for a walk and the other half suggested icon making, I was quite chuffed - it was a lovely day, colours were incredible