Comments | chazper: Best Forgotten, Part 28. And still not "The End".

chazper

Best Forgotten, Part 28. And still not "The End".

Jun 30, 2011 19:29

30 days hath December, April, June . . . Wait, June? And it's already the 30th? Damn! My only excuse for another not-the-end update is that I've been taking classes since school let out. (Must do it to renew my license, and I rather enjoy them but--homework ( Read more... )

best forgotten

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beachtree July 1 2011, 02:14:56 UTC

Imagine, homework assigned by someone else? Oh, the turning tables... As for that continuing ed, yay for occupational hazards. Neverending! Think of all your newly acquired knowledge and honed mad skillz ( ... )

chazper July 5 2011, 23:08:54 UTC

Thanks, beach. I just returned from a long holiday weekend to comments, and I admit that I was a tad nervous reading yours. I knew Kirsten's willingness to listen to Caleb would chafe people (you, in particular!) but I hoped her final reaction would make up for it. Now I agree--the Cohens better run in case Dr. Killer (hee!) gets impatient.

As always, I so appreciate your wonderful feedback. (Are you sure I couldn't talk you into writing the end of this story?)

beachtree July 7 2011, 01:01:41 UTC

Nice to hear you had an extended weekend. I'm not sure why you'd be nervous, even a "tad," about my comments. I think anything I may have mentioned about the Cohen's trek being longer than Cozumel was may have been in jest. Ya think ( ... )

chicletinho July 1 2011, 02:22:42 UTC

At least you gave Ryan more time... maybe one more month? ;)
Thank you for updating despite your tight schedule!

chazper July 5 2011, 23:10:16 UTC

You're welcome. And I promise, I'm aiming for one more month!

finlee July 1 2011, 02:48:17 UTC

You're killing me chaz!!! Another awesome chapter. Can't wait for more!

chazper July 5 2011, 23:13:24 UTC

I'm working on the next part already--don't want the end of the month sneaking up on me again. Thanks so much for reading and for the flattering response (not that I want to kill you!)

marsalka July 1 2011, 03:33:28 UTC

omg,for a moment there I thought that scapel was going to get used!! I too was worried Kirsten was wasting precious time listening to the forked tongue of Caleb... *phew*

chazper July 5 2011, 23:18:46 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and responding, marsalka.

I worried about that Kirsten-Caleb scene (and Sandy not just dragging her away), but reading it aloud only took about five minutes, so I figured that maybe (*crosses fingers*) it wasn't an unforgivable delay. I just thought a caught-Caleb would still try to excuse his actions and that Kirsten would be too horrified to move--like an animal confronted by a snake. (See what you did with your forked tongue metaphor!)

60schic July 1 2011, 03:54:48 UTC

Phew is right! Beachtree hit on several other points I wanted to make. Except for, "Go, Kiki!" I was pretty sure you'd make her lash out at the Magnificent Bastard and you didn't disappoint.

Now get them all the hell into the clinic and finding Ryan!

chazper July 5 2011, 23:21:54 UTC

Glad you enjoyed The Kirsten in full-fury mode (even though it took her a while to get there!)

This is my week-long break between the classes I'm taking and now that the holiday is over, the final search for Ryan is on, I promise.

Hope you enjoyed your 4th, and that you're enjoying summer vacation even more.

60schic July 6 2011, 16:10:27 UTC

the final search for Ryan is on, I promise.

YAYS!!!!!!!

I am enjoying my summer tho am very busy with wedding details.