The Real LJ Idol - Mini-Season - Week 16

Apr 01, 2016 17:02

The Real LJ Idol - Mini-Season - Week 16
This is my entry for Week 15 of LJ Idol (
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halfshellvenus April 2 2016, 06:17:01 UTC
I started to get kind of a black widow/preying mantis feeling from this, but I liked it even better that the narrator was procuring victims for someone else.

And you really made it hard to feel sorry for that particular guy, though he DID assume the attraction was mutual. :O

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murielle April 2 2016, 08:45:18 UTC
This is the kind of horror story that tickles my fancy. It's clever, not cheap, and it delivers a lot more than expected. I would love to have seen some interaction between the sisters, but that's me just being greedy...wanting more!

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orockthro April 2 2016, 14:54:21 UTC
I wasn't expecting this! I like the twists, and I like the choice to use 'love' as a familial, sisterly bond rather than the more obvious romantic love.
:))

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bleodswean April 2 2016, 15:19:51 UTC
EEEP!! GREAT buildup here! Very suspenseful and you did a wonderful job of holding that tension....until the bitter end.

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dmousey April 3 2016, 14:31:56 UTC
Well now, that was fun! What kind of monster was she? I take it the bartender was in on the procurement- which means these peeps were protecting the 'Monster' but why? and so many more q's but we'll leave those for now! ;0) I enjoyed this, Thanks for inking! Peace~~~D

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