Comments | checkerboxed: fic: (for km_anthology) the one i've got is shoddy

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fic: (for km_anthology) the one i've got is shoddy

Feb 01, 2011 00:53

title: the one i've got is shoddy (i need a brand new body)
author: checkerboxed
pairing: gemma kirk/leonard mccoy (brief gemma kirk/gaila)
rating: nc-17
warnings: there's sex. also cuddling.
notes: written for km_anthology : prompt: genderswap.
disclaimer (things i don't own): all the things, including but not limited to, star trek, and johnny flynn's tickle me ( Read more... )

rating: ncc-1701, pairing: kirk/mccoy, km_anthology, fandom: star trek 2009

Comments 25

weepingnaiad February 24 2011, 21:05:33 UTC

Love the growing tension between them and felt that it was just so them. Felt right for them to finally get it together on the Enterprise.

And it's always good to see Gaila and Jim together, no matter their sex!

checkerboxed February 24 2011, 21:07:51 UTC

gaila FOR THE WIN. i love her. i want to write more of her.

thank you for the wonderful comment!

caitri February 25 2011, 00:39:52 UTC

Yumm!! Genderswap is such a tricky business but I think you pulled it off perfectly! Borth your Bones and Jim are so lovely and in character--and adorably hot together!!

checkerboxed February 25 2011, 18:07:22 UTC

why, thank you! :D

secretsolitaire February 28 2011, 05:13:32 UTC

Ooh, this is gorgeous! You write such a yummy Bones. I love when he blushes. *squishes him*

checkerboxed February 28 2011, 20:54:29 UTC

thank you! bones always ends up blushing whenever i write him because i think secretly he's a total sucker for romance. :)

blcwriter March 1 2011, 00:57:14 UTC

Oh my goodness. This was so playful, painful and perfect in turn-- I love your Jemma who is James and how resigned she becomes to it all because she's got a crew to take care of and how Bone-headed Bones is and THANK GOODNESS for Pike, the foxiest fairy godfather of all.

This is fantastic, and the protracted sex scene is AMAZING.

checkerboxed March 2 2011, 17:44:45 UTC

the foxiest fairy godfather of all.

BAHAHAHAHA. oh god.

i'm so happy you liked it! i had a lot of trouble with this one so it's been nice to hear that the sex turned out okay.

thanks for the comment, bb!

rubynye March 6 2011, 04:33:57 UTC

*does a dorky dance of delight*

Oh, this is wonderful. Bones and Jim forever and ever, yet with the slight, skillfully crafted, non-overdone little shifts resulting from genderswap. I love this. *applauds*

checkerboxed March 6 2011, 23:32:12 UTC

*dances with you*

yay! i'm so happy you liked it! i had such a difficult time writing this so i'm glad people actually seem to have enjoyed it. :)