Comments | cheeky_han: NEED ADVICE ON ENGLISH WORK

cheeky_han

NEED ADVICE ON ENGLISH WORK

Jul 09, 2003 13:53

Hey everyone or anyone i would really appreciate it if you would take the time to read both of these poems and give me feed back on them about my grammer, punctuation, spelling, (even though im a fairly good speller) and if you could suggest titles for either of them..it would be a great help ( Read more... )

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luvbuzz July 8 2003, 22:07:36 UTC

your poems are pretty good. i especially like the end of the first poem when you said " this is goodbye from within". but i didnt find the second poem to be confusing.
i love poems that allways talk about lies, hate, and betrayel. its so theroputic

ta cheeky_han July 9 2003, 05:14:32 UTC

thanks craig x i like the last line too, the 2nd one bugs me..but we'll see how they go
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xxx_unv_me_xxx July 9 2003, 14:15:02 UTC

considering i suck at spelling and grammer i cant give feedback on that...but i can say how much i love them both :)

luvbuzz July 10 2003, 21:50:34 UTC

hi han did you get my e-mail?

hope you did byee <3

cheeky_han July 14 2003, 04:34:29 UTC

ya i did! i shall reply this week
good 2 hear from u
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poisonivy918 July 13 2003, 10:24:17 UTC

hey you did pretty good... agonsing or whateva is def spelled wrong though lol even though i dunno how to spell it but it jus seems wrong or maybe i'm jus dumb lol... everything else is good hehe

cheeky_han July 14 2003, 04:53:28 UTC

lol i thought it was right? ohwell, i'll have to check it.
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