You do realize that's more of a cliffhanger than where you last left us? :P So many more possibilities and just mind games to play with there. Got to say it's quite Brilliant! Though I don't know if you should make this public, seeing as a lot of your readers are portkey people, and you know how most of them are. They might cry sacrilege.
It was over. And they knew it.
Is it over, for them? Harry and Hermione? Or the whole ordeal over, the triangle. Absolutely brilliant way to end it,
Oh, and you can't say anything about me not wanting to see Brokeback Mountain, now can you?
Well, you only read this b/c you didn't know what was coming, didn't you? But, admit it, you liked it just a smidgen...;)
Yes, there are many more questions and that is the point. I wanted it to be ambiguous. It is your job as the reader to let your imagination go wild with possibilities. I'm not so arrogant to say that 'this is how it ends' and you're wrong if you don't agree with me. I know how I think it ends, but there's no right answer.
Maybe I'll write a fic with Ron in therapy.
"So tell me Ron, what is your relationship with your mother?"
"My mum? What does she have to do with buggering Harry?"
Haha, you're right about the surprising me part, but I'd like to think I'm comfortable enough in my sexuality to be able to read something like this. It didn't really do anything at all to turn me on, but as a what the fuck this is fucked kind of thing, I did enjoy it... always have liked the dark stuff. Actually, that isn't the first trio fic I've ever read, heh.
Sad ending, but wonderful story. I was quite shocked when Ron joined in, though I love how Harry reassured Hermione that he was making love to her. Yet, from what I could tell, the relationship is over :(
I know. There's a sale on ice skates in hell. I doubt that I'll ever be a real 'trio writer' since this one isn't really the OT3 t00by love that I associate with trio. I"m sure there's angsty trio, but I don't like the idea of r/h enough, or r/hr at all, to really write it consistently. Although I might write Ron/Draco. That ship has always intrigued me.
I'm sorry I sounded so incoherent earlier. I realize that it isn't really trio, not in the Great T00by Trio Lurve sense of the word. I haven't figured out why Ron did what he did at the end, or exactly how Harry felt about it. And maybe I'm not supposed to, right? BTW I loved you reply to jonoki :D If I have any qualms about this story, it's that throughout I have a feeling that it's all about the sex, at least for Hermione. Harry says "the woman I love" but Hermione makes no such admission, probably because she's torn between the two guys. Anyway - this is a story that I won't forget for a long, long time. Kudos.
Grad school- ugh, don't remind me. And no, I don't think I'll be missing any deadlines (at least i hope I don't...) (Of course, I'm going to have to avoid re-reading this...) ;-)
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Love love love.
Brilliant.
*memories*
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It was over. And they knew it.
Is it over, for them? Harry and Hermione? Or the whole ordeal over, the triangle. Absolutely brilliant way to end it,
Oh, and you can't say anything about me not wanting to see Brokeback Mountain, now can you?
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Yes, there are many more questions and that is the point. I wanted it to be ambiguous. It is your job as the reader to let your imagination go wild with possibilities. I'm not so arrogant to say that 'this is how it ends' and you're wrong if you don't agree with me. I know how I think it ends, but there's no right answer.
Maybe I'll write a fic with Ron in therapy.
"So tell me Ron, what is your relationship with your mother?"
"My mum? What does she have to do with buggering Harry?"
Just kidding. :)
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*falls over dead*
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The last line just killed me. Broke my heart and then killed me.
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And no, I don't think I'll be missing any deadlines (at least i hope I don't...)
(Of course, I'm going to have to avoid re-reading this...) ;-)
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