That was amazing, seriously, just brilliant writing, perfectly built up and perfectly executed. I loved the dialogue and the story, the situation they were in, how real and believable it was. Absolute class, loved it
Don't bloody encourage me. At any given point in time I am always this close to quitting uni, being a bum and writing all the time - But they'd make me go on a dole course again though Sivi, and that was an unspeakable horror. Imagine if N-Dubz reproduced through mitosis, and you're somewhere on par with that.
I wish you were Major Cunt, like the military rank. I'd be Private Fanny, natch.
Private Fanny - At ease.
(Oh god, that is disgustingly filthy - ON ACCIDENT)
You deserve some awards for all of this. And yeah, no, integrate into society; let's make millions in the next few years and then retire and just wank about on the internet professionally.
So enjoyable to read and yet painful for Emily. And probably Naomi too.
Emily's strength here is right on - like, she's working so hard here for both of them. And it works because she's never a victim, not even when Naomi's being a massive cunt, Emily knows what it is, this thing between them.
And she doesn't push - never forces Naomi to be someone she's not but lets her come to her own conclusions.
Love them at Uni as it makes me feel a bit better about their ages ;)
Echoing S - wish you would just write all the time :)
Oh, wow, this was entirely worth the wait. It's so perfect and not at all what I was expecting when I first made the request, but it's so real and lovely, and oh, does such wondrous things to my heart.
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This was an absolute pleasure to read! Hilarious, really. And yet, touching and meaningful.
I think you hit the nail on the head when you said that Naomi has to surrender or fight. No compromises with that one.
Well done!
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Thanks! And I'm glad you enjoyed it dude :) ♥
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/chuff
MINOR CUNT OUT!
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I wish you were Major Cunt, like the military rank. I'd be Private Fanny, natch.
Private Fanny - At ease.
(Oh god, that is disgustingly filthy - ON ACCIDENT)
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We can call it the Berk Army. ARE YOU IN?
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So enjoyable to read and yet painful for Emily. And probably Naomi too.
Emily's strength here is right on - like, she's working so hard here for both of them. And it works because she's never a victim, not even when Naomi's being a massive cunt, Emily knows what it is, this thing between them.
And she doesn't push - never forces Naomi to be someone she's not but lets her come to her own conclusions.
Love them at Uni as it makes me feel a bit better about their ages ;)
Echoing S - wish you would just write all the time :)
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Gorgeous, babe. Absolutely gorgeous. ♥
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