Kiss Bingo: Emotion: Surprise

Aug 29, 2010 21:23

Title: Let the Devil Have Tomorrow
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: NC 17
Length: ~3,000 words
Category: First Time
Notes: Thank you to the Grrrl for her always valuable criticism. Missing scene from 5x10 "Abandon All Hope."
Summary: Dean isn't the only one capable of pointing out they might be dead tomorrow.

Let the Devil Have Tomorrow )

supernatural, dean/castiel, kiss bingo

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olympia_m August 30 2010, 07:25:22 UTC
no, this is really making me go all 'aaaaawwww' and takes me to a very happy place! :):):)

I'd have to quote the whole thing to tell you which were my favourite parts :):)

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chellefic August 30 2010, 11:04:40 UTC
I'm glad it put you in a happy place. Dean totally surprised me with this story. I wasn't expecting it to be so intense.

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sarahlizzie August 30 2010, 12:27:16 UTC
AWW
I think I literally melted at that last line. >.< And you're right, it is intense and Dean's all out of his comfort zone and Cas is all smiley and it's all AWW
Yes, very well done :)

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chellefic August 30 2010, 19:56:29 UTC
Thank you! I'm pleased you liked it. The ending caught me by surprise, along with the intensity. When I sat down to write it the whole thing morphed into a story I wasn't quite expecting.

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chellefic August 30 2010, 19:56:44 UTC
Thank you!

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mulder200 August 30 2010, 12:35:08 UTC
Ah! Once again, this was so sweet! I love how Cas wanted his first time to be with Dean because he trusted him and how Dean was the perfect gentleman for him.

Quite sweet!

But that way it sounded stupid. "Why do you even want to have sex? You weren't all that interested before."

FYI, I think you meant put here.

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chellefic August 30 2010, 19:58:01 UTC
Thank you for pointing out the But/Put confusion. It's all fixed now.

I'm glad you liked the story. I had to do something to make "Abandon All Hope" a little more bearable. ::sniff::

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pyjamagurl August 30 2010, 13:01:07 UTC
Awwww.

I have nothing intelligent to say,this is just cute and I love the snuggling at the end. *happy sigh*

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chellefic August 30 2010, 20:01:46 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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