Atlantis Fic - Last Man episode Tag

[chensuu]

Last Man episode tag

I kind of saw things differently...spoilers within.

Comments

[_inbetween_]

I didn't see this earlier but just remembered to check back in.

I'd have liked to see this, even a little bit (or a whole hour). Believe it or not, it's still not bleak enough for me. I think he'll crawl out into the sand, having exhausted all possibilities inside the dead city, and finally die there, never to be found.

[chensuu]

Yes I understand you. And I agree. But the pain was almost too much for me to write. I thought of the sand and I was afraid of it.

In the end perhaps, after what I've written, John will go there. And die there. And still it hurts so much to think about.

[chensuu]

Thank you very much. The Last Man made me feel sad and I honest to god wish it didn't. Poor, poor John.

*shudders*

[anonymous]

That's... actually quite a scary thoughts. O_o

I didn't even think about what would have happened if Rodney had not tried to save John!

It's too bad Todd died. I can imagine Rodney telling Todd that Sheppard got sent to the future and that if he could, keep a look out for him.

Re: *shudders*

[chensuu]

I know if I were Sheppard and hologram Rodney was telling me that story I'd be thinking I was pretty darn lucky that Keller died.

[idee_fixe13]

Thanks for writing this. It hurts, but in a way I needed it. Because he was very close to ending up like that and the ep skirted over it too easily.

[chensuu]

Thank you! I agree with you completely. Just one mention, one thought that Rodney had the idea before Keller and I might have been able to enjoy the episode more.

The way it was done is painful and I still don't get how some people can't understand how close John really came to never coming home.

[starbuck92]

Wow. I really enjoyed this piece. I'm not one to read fic often, but I'm glad I took a chance on yours. Very true to the character.

[chensuu]

Thank you very much. After seeing the episode it was just something I had to get off my chest. I'm very happy you enjoyed reading it!