Comments | cherimola: First Love, Chapter 22

cherimola

First Love, Chapter 22

Oct 03, 2010 16:59

( coalescence )

lure, rating:nc-17, luke/reid, first love, atwt, fan fiction

Comments 34

jem_018 October 4 2010, 16:54:56 UTC

Reid was gone.
I am panicking just a little bit. *gasps*

This was a lovely chapter. I love the way you write. I am amazed at the intimacy and the imagery you convey.
I felt like I was there intruding on their private moments.

This was such a pleasure to read. *sighs happily*

cherimola October 4 2010, 21:20:19 UTC

There's only a little need to panic :)

And there is nothing more I could hope for in a comment. Thank you!

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cherimola October 4 2010, 21:24:09 UTC

Wow. Thank you. I just...thank you.

I freakin' love you.

(as for your question: *evil grin*)

shar_jere October 4 2010, 19:13:29 UTC

"Reid was gone." he went to get food...yep that has to be it!!

cherimola October 4 2010, 21:24:32 UTC

He does love his food :)

erica_is_amazed October 18 2010, 02:40:04 UTC

I was half-heartedly attempting to paint the wall behind my bed - when taking a fanfic break - stumbled on this story and from the first paragraph I was mesmerized by your writing.

I am now convincing myself that I don't really like the paint color because the roller dried out and I am engrossed in this tale and will be downloading it to my smartphone and reading it during down times at work tomorrow. That is, if I don't stay up WAY TOO LATE tonight to read it.

Incredible. Thank you for posting it here.

cherimola October 18 2010, 04:45:42 UTC

Thanks for reading! And I didn't like that paint color, either.

dpracket October 19 2010, 05:40:45 UTC

Why have I not read this fic before?!

This was hot and beautiful and loving and...wow.

I'm going to go back and read the first 20-something chapters to catch up. :)

cherimola October 19 2010, 23:05:52 UTC

You're back, yay! So glad you found me here :)

dpracket October 19 2010, 23:53:29 UTC

In starting from the beginning, I realize that I have read the beginning of this before...over at LJ?

I stopped reading over there around the time of the unfortunate ending of the show. I went over there last week and read a few completed fics. I was having trouble keeping up with fics on both boards, so I settled over here. Can't even keep up over here.

I'm so glad I started reading your fic again. It is soooooooooooo good. I love hearing Luke's thoughts, and it's wonderful to see Reid opening up.

Interested to see how it ends up.

cherimola October 21 2010, 04:04:02 UTC

I certainly know how hard it can be to keep up with everything. Yes, my main home has been LRO (so you can blame the fics there for slowing down my writing). Thanks for the kind words!