Comments | cherimola: Outlier, Chapter 4

cherimola

Outlier, Chapter 4

Jan 13, 2011 14:59

lure, rating:nc-17, luke/reid, atwt, outlier, fan fiction

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cherimola January 14 2011, 03:08:18 UTC

Re: Noah's brain -- what, me? double meanings?

Ha, I appreciate your promise to read it eventually. I was pleased with the, um, forward momentum leading up to Luke's cheerful appearance. (said appearance maybe being my favorite moment)

Chapter 5 should be especially enlightening. Too bad you'll have to wait 'til I get back from my business trip next week. *ducks*

slayerkitty January 13 2011, 23:04:36 UTC

I think LuRe has ruined me for het porn. The entire time I was reading I kept thinking "This is just...too weird." LOL

THANK GOD IT WAS A DREAM.

I have no idea what's going on with Reid, and by God, it's killing me.

traciamc January 14 2011, 00:28:40 UTC

ITA!!! I was reading it thinking, "This is just not right!!" We are spoiled forever now, I'm afraid!

cherimola January 14 2011, 03:11:35 UTC

It's killing you, really? But is it slaying you? *hangs head* (Imma go to bed now)

P.S. Did you like the "why are you treating me like this"? After I'd nearly pitchforked you to death when you'd considered using it?

slayerkitty January 14 2011, 03:31:47 UTC

LMAO. Oooh. Bad puns. I love it!

OMG. You! *shakes finger* LMAO - It's not nearly as hurtful here, though. In my fic, it would have hurt a lot.

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traciamc January 14 2011, 00:30:35 UTC

The first part once again freaked me out, although I did figure out that it was a dream...that made it bearable. However, I was very happy to move on.

Poor Reid. He's just not sure HOW to react to our Luke, now is he? I love how unsure Luke makes him...and nervous! I wonder why that could be, hmmmmmm?

Can't wait for the next chapter! <3

cherimola January 14 2011, 03:22:14 UTC

Yup, we definitely are ruined -- for het sex to have to be "bearable." :)

This is fucking awesome lane_montgomery January 14 2011, 00:54:31 UTC

You are the perfect writer to plunge into these depths and make it work.

This fascinating and a great spin on things. I love Luke being self-aware and Reid drowning in it all.

Re: This is fucking awesome cherimola January 14 2011, 03:26:46 UTC

That was a fucking beautiful comment. ♥

im_with_him84 January 14 2011, 00:56:50 UTC

More! Need more!
And I agree with whoever commented that Lure has ruined het porn. It just does nothing for me anymore. Looking forward to seeing Lure porn!! :D

cherimola January 14 2011, 03:27:56 UTC

I'll see what I can do. ;)