Comments | cherimola: Outlier, Chapter 4

cherimola

Outlier, Chapter 4

Jan 13, 2011 14:59

( slippery when wet )

lure, rating:nc-17, luke/reid, atwt, outlier, fan fiction

Comments 59

murgy31 January 14 2011, 01:11:10 UTC

OMG!!!!! This is great! It is like riding a roller coaster...

cherimola January 14 2011, 03:29:15 UTC

Thanks! Roller coaster, hmm...maybe that explains why everyone is suddenly so nauseated. :)

nanaloralee January 14 2011, 02:06:20 UTC

It is just so funny if anyone had told me a couple of years ago that I would be reading m/m porn and like it I would have thought they were crazy but now I have read so much of it that reading about Reid with Katie kinda grosses me out lol. Luke is going to work his magic on Reid though he can't resist those puppy eyes and pouty lips.

cherimola January 14 2011, 03:31:24 UTC

Both Luke and Reid have certainly worked their black magic on us. It was no easier writing mf than it probably was to read. :)

Thanks for your comment!

bluemagicrose January 14 2011, 04:12:03 UTC

I knew it was a dream from the get go (mostly because Katie said in the last chapter she wasn't ready) but good Lord, the first part is my favorite part of any fiction ever. I laughed like a hyena when Luke showed up and was all nonchalant about everything, like it was no big deal. And then the ending, with him asking if Reid ever tried anal. Lost my mind.

On the bright side, everyone in my home thinks I'm crazy now, so there's that.

Somehow this story gets better and better (and every chapter is so damn great). Safe travels to Jordan. Is it wrong that I hope there's a period where you're bored and just write like ten more chapters? It is? Okay, well, enjoy as much of the trip as you can around the whole work part. :D

cherimola January 14 2011, 17:02:33 UTC

Aww, thanks!! I did have an unusual amount of fun writing the dream. And good thing I live alone -- I've spent the last week at home randomly saying, "Whatcha doin'"?

Is it wrong that I hope I'm bored in Jordan?

rolsfan January 14 2011, 04:13:23 UTC

This is so weird. I've read LuRe fanfic for so long, it's just too bizarre to think about Reid and Katie. Ewww. And I'm straight! But I do love how Luke affects him. This is really well written. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

cherimola January 14 2011, 17:03:11 UTC

Thanks! And "eww" seems to be the consensus. :)

shar_jere January 14 2011, 05:40:23 UTC

omg this is unbelievable crazy but i like it.....next chapter :P

cherimola January 14 2011, 17:03:33 UTC

Glad you like the crazy. ;)