What Is Love? Chapter 5

[chhhachie]

Author: Chhhachie
Title: What Is Love?
Part: 5/5
Pairing: Mark/Sabrina
Rating: PG
Summary: The conclusion of the horribly dragged on story! What will our favorite couple finally get to say to each other when they meet face to face for the first time in two months?
Comments: I think I always knew in the back of my mind how this was going to end up...but

Comments

[itsasnapshot]

I love this!! I think you ended this perfectly! I love how you summed up their feelings throughout the entire story in this chapter. I loved how they simply said "I'm falling in love with you" after all their confusion. This whole story was beautiful.

He wanted to mold her body to his, as he felt it fit against his perfectly.

This had been her favorite spot since they had started dating, and the realization came to her that she had been missing it profusely. His body seemed harder, and his arms felt stronger as he lifted her up and spun around...but she had never felt so comfortable in her entire life.

^Loved those parts. Actually, I loved the whole thing!! You did an amazing job with this!!!

[chhhachie]

Thank you so much! I had hoped the use of the word "falling" would be sufficient enough to make people happy! Glad it did :)

[fountnofthought]

Oh. My. God. This story may be many things, but it is not horribly dragged on. It is perfect. I really mean that

[chhhachie]

Ok, i just smiled for about ten minutes straight after reading your comment. My sister asked me three times why I was smiling like an idiot. :)

THANK. YOU. SO. MUCH. I always feel so great when you notice little things in my writing...even when you notice things that I didn't intend to be noticed! I really can't tell you how much your comments have helped me over the course of my time spent writing on this forum. I really would not have been this into it if I didn't have such great ideas and encouragement from you, and everyone else.

AND, the whole premise for this story came from you...so a HUGE thanks to you for that. I actually forgot to mention that in the final chapter, and i feel really bad...i would never have been able to come up with this idea without your coaxing!

And, i'm very glad you appreciate my humor at the end. I COULDN'T HELP MYSELF! I ALMOST took it out...but then i decided it would be going against everything i've ever written. :)

anyway...THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!

[fountnofthought]

I'm so glad I've been a help to you as you've been writing. I see major strides in what you're accomplishing, so keep at it!

I'm still really glad I somehow suggested this idea to you - it worked out beautifully. That's the best way for these things to happen. After all, Countdown only happened because of something in Annie's fic, which led to our whole foray into ridiculous journal writing. And so many of those entries I write are with you in mind!

So thanks for loaning me the funny, and listening to me about the angsty and descriptive. It's making us better writers, which is what really matters. ;-)

[gydas]

*dies* This is the perfect ending to your story! Just gorgeous and adorable! My favorite lines: Her body was warm, but her nose was cold as it pressed into his neck, her lips grazing his skin with the softest kiss imaginable. His arms tightened around her waist as he lifted her several inches off the ground, twirling them slightly in place. He wanted to mold her body to his, as he felt it fit against his perfectly. and "Sabrina, I’m falling in love with you.” Absolutely love it! And Derek at the end! *rofl* Keep up the amazing work! Now I'm wondering what else you have up your sleeve! Lol! *hugs* ♥ Tiffany

[chhhachie]

oh, i definitely have more up my sleeve! (Probably some comedy coming up in the future, because my emotional depths have been wiped out trying to produce this story)
:)

[gydas]

I love comedy! Especially involving Mark, Sabrina and Derek! Lol! And some Julianne would be nice! Hehe! Oh, and I agree with all that Linds said! Her remark about Derek on a surf board has me rolling! ♥ Tiffany

[fountnofthought]

Yeah, that analogy kind of got away from me there for a minute. ;-) But that's Derek for you!

[soulpatrol1]

This series was so amzaing it's hard to pic out one thing I liked it was all so wonderful, great job!

[fuegohielo]

Perfection. You have such a way with words, it is incredible. Very heartfelt but not overly mushy. I Love It

[chhhachie]

good, i'm glad it wasn't too mushy. i had a hard time trying to figure out how to balance it all out, and i'm happy it worked out :)