Title: Apoapsis
Prompt: #21 La Douleur Exquise (French) - The heart-wrenching pain of wanting someone you can’t have. (Centers on the one whose love is not returned)
Verse: G1 (although it's vague enough that it can fit anywhere, really)
Rating: PG
Words: 687
Contains: Very brief self-stimulation and lots of angst.
Summary: Jazz held the gravitational
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Comments 19
I'm going to wibble over Prowl now, even though he was a right aft when I was trying to write the piece for my day 19 prompt. Which will be posted along with 23-prompt. I think my computer will have finished throwing its wobbly by then.
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I can't wait for your next update!! :D I absolutely love Alegria and how you're fleshing out Prowl and Jazz's relationship and personal backgrounds. (I'm sorry I haven't reviewed yet - I'm horrible about doing so but I'll make sure to leave a comment on the next chapter *determined face*)
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I love the imagery of 'fly too close to the sun and you'll get burned' you've used here
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Thank you! I tried to keep the idea of Jazz being something beautiful and untouchable consistent by comparing him with a sun throughout the story and I'm happy to see that it worked. :)
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
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This was an ouch-worthy read, to be sure. I winced a few times when Prowl talked about how Jazz was trying to make it friendship rather than infatuation...poor Prowl. He really does do everyhting with his whole spark, holding nothing back.
On a different note, do you still have plans for Verumi? I know you've been asked +infinity times, but inquiring minds are ever inquisitive. ^_^ If not, how would it have ended? Caste 'Verse? Only curious, not pushing for chapters- just very interested in how things could have/will go. Thanks!
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Jazz was trying to help, really! He just didn't realize that Prowl's infatuation was something a little bit more powerful and that he was doing more harm than good. :C
Ah yes, Verumi. I honestly haven't looked at it much (I am easily distracted by just about everything) but I really do want to complete it. I already know what I want to do, just need to get the words out. It's the same with Caste - I actually have the next chapter completed so you may be seeing that in a few days ^_~ and I honestly don't mind being poked about this stuff so feel free to poke away!
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Thank you! Sad prompt was very sad but I'm very happy that I managed to do a good job on it.
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