Forget I Said It

Jan 22, 2012 10:08

Author: chickinwhite
Pairing: Kahlan / Cara
Word account: ~ 2700
Rating: PG 17
Summary: After "Desecrated" Kahlan needs to talk to Cara...
Disclaimer: no business, just fan-fun!
AN: Originally written for  lots_pornbattle, Prompts: Desecrated, more than a hug - what really happened - and - Kahlan seeks out Cara after Desecrated  (though it turned out to be more the ( Read more... )

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jolo_65 January 22 2012, 10:25:55 UTC
Woohoo...you finally posted this ... \o/

Love how you told the story via flashbacks showing events as they unfolded in the tomb...in a way its nice to think that something along these lines actually happened!!! heh

Great little story ....thank you :)

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chickinwhite January 22 2012, 10:31:23 UTC
You know you´re so very welcome, hon!
Thanks for pushing me :)
And yes, that´s what I keep stubbornly imagining that happened in the tomb. Stupid people just cut it out... *pouts* So there was need to save it in a lil story :)

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vanchidel January 22 2012, 11:41:49 UTC
Pretty... sooo pretty... :) :) :)

I love Desecrated (don't we all? ;)) and I am so glad you decided to write a what-happened-in-the-tomb fic... ;) And I really like you wrote it as flashbacks during the aftermath ;) The C/K scene (the argument, and then the kiss) is very passionate and touching. :) :)

And so many beautiful parts, like "The brunette falls silent, her body goes limp under the pressure of Cara´s form, her gaze draws soft trails over the blondes features; as if stroking her skin with the sudden midnight velvet of her eyes, overwhelmed by the whirl of emotions she finds glowing under the surface." Aaaawwww :) :) <3

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chickinwhite January 22 2012, 13:04:19 UTC
Aww, Thank you! You know I love your writing, so it makes me grow a whole inch that you think it´s pretty!
And descrated is one of my favorites! (well, beside the other seven or eight eps... LOL!) I couldn´t resist the prompts.
So happy you liked it! Thank you!

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fortunata13 January 22 2012, 12:37:54 UTC
JOY!!!!! I'm so glad you decided to post this fic. It turned out beautifully. LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT.

Thanks for sharing.

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chickinwhite January 22 2012, 13:03:23 UTC
I knew you waited for it... :) And I think it was worth the wait, no? `Cause I really needed to overwork it a little. So that you may finally say: it turned out beautifully! *beams proudly*
Thank you, dear! Glad to hear you love it!

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julz_t January 22 2012, 18:41:26 UTC
Nice work! Love the flow of the story! As jojo_65 has said, the flash back works really well!! Love it. Even though we all ~know exactly what happened in the tomb, it's nice to have it in writings! *cheeky grin* lol
Lovely read!

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chickinwhite January 23 2012, 09:21:44 UTC
Ahh, thank you! The flash back was somehow an experiment, but I thought it could work - so I´m totally happy that it does!
And yes, the true happenings need to be written, so that we all may have words for it... LOL!
Thanks again for your kind words... :)

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warriordebs January 22 2012, 19:52:02 UTC
This was indeed beautiful & HOT! I loved how you told the story via flashbacks.
Great work, thanks for sharing!!!!

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chickinwhite January 23 2012, 09:23:17 UTC
Aw, beautiful? So kind a word! Thank you - just for the hotness I wasn´t too sure... But, I love to hear you liked it!

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