PYRAMID

[chilipip]

Title: PYRAMID
Chapter: TWELVE
WC: 6,361
Characters: Laura, Starbuck, Maya, Tory, Kalin, Adama, Anders, and OC's
Rating: MA
Disclaimer: Same as every chapter before... *sighs*

Special thanks to my awesome beta Ellen for all her patience and time. Cheers Honey!

Enjoy! And Remember, hugs make me write faster... Pweez hug the Brat!

PYRAMID

Comments

[caramelapples11]

Aha! Bill finally sees Kalin and Laura! I've been waiting for this for such a long time! I'm in love with Kalin just because he's so perfect but I'm still an A/R shipper, obviously... *grin

[chilipip]

Everytime! You crack me the frak up tattle tale!

See, now this is why I write, to see how much crazy I can bring out in you. You're excitement is infectious, *see how I'm giggling*.

You came back in time! Kalin made Laura his *girlfriend* and he was kissing her and he gave her a frakking tub! A frakkin' TUB! And boy, Laura can flirt. *smirk*... This is by far my favourite part *howling now*

I'm glad you're having to much fun... can't wait to see what you do next week.

;D

[caramelapples11]

Yes! I seldom get excited over fics. But yours! *bounces* Delicious! And I am glad that I crack you up. *grin* Since you write this wonderful (angsty) fic, someone needs to crack you up so can write more and update soon! *giggles* *grins*

P.S. To Admiral Adama - Bill, you need to get your act together! NOW!

[caramelapples11]

I'm adding you. I hope you won't mind.

[chilipip]

Adding me to...?

[caramelapples11]

As a friend. ;o) Friending you.

[chilipip]

Ohh!

Duh! Soo not the sharpest tool in the shed sometimes I wasn't even thinking when I got you're message.

Sure! Of course I don't mind... friend-away.

[lullabymoon]

Awesome! I loved the way Bill was subtly checking Kalin out. Of course I would have preferred a full-out fistfight over Laura but I suppose there is always time for that once Bill gets his act together. LOL.

It's nice to see Laura happy and continuing to let down her barriers around Kalin and having some interaction with Kara. I think it's a bit of a shame that Kalin doesn't understand what happened between Laura and Bill but I love they way he is giving her time and being careful about pushing her.

In fact, and I might have mentioned this before, but I totally love everything about this fic. I'm even torn between who I want Laura to finally end up with. I mostly ship A/R but I just adore Kalin and he is soo good for her. Hmm... I'll just have to wait I suppose :(

[chilipip]

FISTFIGHT!

I love it! Maybe I'll write one just for you ;D

I have to tell you, I am enjoying the Kara/Laura relationship very much. I didn't expect to, but I think it's becoming my favourite. As for Kalin, don't sell him short, I think Kalin's a lot smarter than me sometimes ;D

Thank you for loving this fic, and yes you have mentioned it many timed before. And NO! please don't stop! Too much of a good thing is an awesome thing!

Oh, and yeah, you suppose right...

[lullabymoon]

Yay for fistfight. Please? Pretty please? Pretty please with Laura on top?

Well mibbe Kalin has some idea what's going on but I think there are very few people who know Laura or Bill well enough to know all the complexities of their relationship and therefore Kalin might get a bit confused.

Of course I won't stop mentioning how much I love this fic. After all evey brilliant fic needs a fangirl. :D

Masha=)

[just_reading_u]

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! Tuesday is a holiday for me now=)
Adama saw them, wow!!!
You know, I love A/R... BUT, your Kalin is sooo real & it'll be sad if she leaves him like that. Say nothing of Admiral's demeanor needs a revenge!

P.S. Now-thath-isth-sthomethink-eyesth-no-abouths!!! -what does it mean? I know it's a joke (irony or smth), but my language skills are not so wide, so can you please explain?

Re: Masha =)

[chilipip]

You're welcomewelcomewelcome

Tuesday is NOT holiday if me! Tuesday is busiest day of the year for me. But I do have lots of fun!!!

I love A&R too, but I love Kalin too. I think Bill should kick his ass!

P.S. Now-thath-isth-sthomethink-eyesth-no-abouths!!! -what does it mean? I know it's a joke (irony or smth), but my language skills are not so wide, so can you please explain?

I'm sorry! You see, chilipip drinks... a lot! She's always a little bit tipsy. So she talks funny sometimes. But I can tell you what she said: "Now that is something I no about." Does that make sense? I think she was refering to your comment about all the frakking.
Dah!

Ciao

Re: Masha =)

[just_reading_u]

Now makes sence, thank you=)
And you know, Masha was a little tipsy herself when she wrote that "frakking" part of the comment and now the's sober and feels shame...

Bue

Re: Masha =)

[chilipip]

LOL!

[theladylucilla]

Aha! I've been waiting for this, for Bill and Kalin to find out about each other. yay!

But now that it's happened, I feel kinda sad for everybody... 'cause I can't see this ending well.
I really like Kalin, but I love Bill too, and poor Laura's caught in the middle. Eeep!
Excellent chapter, I loved how Bill and Kalin were checking each other out.
Can't wait to see what happens next.

[chilipip]

Thank you!

I feel kinda sad for everybody... 'cause I can't see this ending well.

*giggles* I can't tell you... Poor Laura!? *snark* I would give anything to be san'wiched 'tween those two. Who know's maybe they'll run off together and smite her lucky ass!

I can't wait to see what happens either!