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chococoffeekiss

FIC: Paying Attention

Jul 26, 2010 03:16

Title: Paying Attention
Fandom, Pairing: Harry Potter, R/T (is there another?)
Word Count: 2800ish
Prompt: I believe it was cake, but it’s been so long. :D
Warnings: Mild-to-spicy swear words, mentions of lingerie and mostly-innocuous lingerie-related materials. Contains vague references to The Dresden Files novels by Jim Butcher (I will slowly ( Read more... )

rated pg, fanfic, harry potter, humour, r/t

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katyscarlett76 July 26 2010, 12:46:55 UTC

How nice to have some new R/T! :)

This was lovely, great cameos from the elder Weasley boys, and lovely Remus and Sirius interaction :) I thought it was a great idea to have Remus and Tonks sharing a book interest (the image of him whispering lines in her ear during meetings is delightfully yummy :) ). I really liked the voice you gave Tonks in this, a nice combination of sparky wit, intelligence and not-quite-sure that's just Tonks all over :)

chococoffeekiss August 9 2010, 13:56:11 UTC

Thank you! And thanks for reading. :D

gilpin25 July 26 2010, 14:24:29 UTC

Your fics (and icons) should come with a general health and safety warning. As in, Not to be read whilst attempting to eat lunch and avoid laughing at one and the same time.

I loved Tonks' voice, her gradually dawning Remus realizations, and acute observations of two men who haven't grown up, just grown taller. There are far too many good lines I'm envious of, including Tonks sitting through a Paying Attention class, the accidental gifting of lingerie and Sirius' sentient eyebrows. Is it wrong to hope that someone draws Charlie in his Madonna-like bra?

Great read!:D

chococoffeekiss July 28 2010, 04:25:44 UTC

Your fics (and icons) should come with a general health and safety warning.

May contain trace amounts of insanity? Proven in the State of California to cause Squirting-Soda-from-Nose? LOL. I'll work on this. XD

Is it wrong to hope that someone draws Charlie in his Madonna-like bra?

If I could draw, it would be illustrated. XD

katyhasclogs July 26 2010, 14:51:38 UTC

Ooh fantastic! You write the sweetest and most hilarious R/T, and this was another gem. I was grinning from start to finish. :D

chococoffeekiss August 9 2010, 13:57:51 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you didn't think it was too silly, lol. :)

sspring92 July 27 2010, 05:40:16 UTC

Love oversexed Sr Weasley's and Drun!k Charlie! A lot of really good characterization here! But then again, you always do! So glad there's another Meta event on it's way!

chococoffeekiss July 28 2010, 04:12:23 UTC

I'm really excited about the Meta event too! I can't wait to start writing! And thank you, as always, for sticking around and reading the crazy things I post. <3

kt_tonguetied July 28 2010, 00:30:01 UTC

Birthday-hat-bra. It cannot be unseen.

o.o

Seriously, my conscious brain was getting all gooey over the rest, but my subconscious mind kept seeing Charlie like that and giggling to itself...

chococoffeekiss July 28 2010, 04:10:54 UTC

LOL! I've actually seen a guy do that, it's why I had to put that in.

So the rest of you can suffer with me. XD

I always feel like I need to apologize or warn people that things in head border on the surreal. O_o

kt_tonguetied July 28 2010, 04:22:45 UTC

lol well it's not so much that it was a BAD image, just that Charlie is one of my favorite Weasleys (and mentioned the very least of all of them, go figure xD) and so it just keeps replaying over and over in its epic drunken awesomeness. xDDDD

chococoffeekiss July 28 2010, 04:29:38 UTC

LOL! It was going to be Bill at first, but he's much too grown-up for such behavior. And Shirtless!Charlie seems to be an interesting thing to contemplate. XD

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