Jeff and Annie's Page-a-Day Calendar (19/?)

[chocolatmoosepi]

Mleh. like the concept of this one but not so much my execution.

Peace and Love,
~ Moosey ~

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Jeff was…pointy.

His nose stuck out like a shark’s fin from the middle of his face.

His ears could almost pass for normal, if not for the two sharp angles squaring them off at the top.

His

Comments

[supercapo]

Okay, you win. I really like this one (I've liked them all but this one stands out to me). Very very good use of theme and description for the characters and their relationships. The sharp contrast between pointy Jeff and soft Annie is what makes me like this pair.

[screeching_stop]

Awesome! That is all.

[fangirl_101]

Can I just copy and paste supercapo's comment? JK! But I agree completely with him. I really like how you've described why Jeff and Annie work together--hard and soft conforming perfectly to each other. Definitely one of you best. IMO :D