hiding beneath sweaters

Aug 11, 2006 19:33

so it turns out i'm a shitty songwriter when it comes to the words. but it also turns out that the 'fon is a genius. exhibit a. the boob pentameter ( Read more... )

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psychrofon August 12 2006, 03:42:33 UTC
grade out and pave it now
i'll be a dumptruck you be a plow
modern tools of the linux revolution
putting caps on Ural pollution

kick kick the habit
the hobbit kicks it hard
quick, dick the rabbit
whose diggin in yer yard

work all the days
and play the years away
sing down the doors
and build a wall to stay

throw a blanket party
crush the opposition
they'll find you with their children
in a compromised position

reading the score down
the page of wall street blues
shooting the shit with those
with shit on their shoes

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choconerd August 14 2006, 22:59:00 UTC
i gave it a shot

it didn't turn out as well as the other one. maybe because i'm running on zero beers

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psychrofon August 15 2006, 01:33:49 UTC
i think you need to double the pace.

i was thinking a song structure similar to "wake up early in karakatu alaska" or something like that.

i like your guitar work though. HARSHing.

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choconerd August 16 2006, 12:10:05 UTC
yeah bro, that's about as fast as i could play it without having the words memorized. plus, i can't really play guitar and sing at the same time, so the guitar really loses rhythm in a lot of places. if you've got a melody in mind, you should sing it and record it and send it to me. or we can do it over ichat.

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