1 - Enough

[chokingsmoker]

Title:               Enough
Author:          chokingsmoker
Pairing:          Ohmiya (Ohno Satoshi and Ninomiya Kazunari), Yama (Ohno Satoshi and Sakurai Sho)
Rating:           PG [?]
Disclaimer:    Not for profit. Fiction.
Word Count:  2,028
Summary:      Sakurai Sho thinks about Ohno Satoshi.
Notes:             I tried to write Sho as the deep thinking Keio boy I've

Comments

Please ignore the somewhat inappropriate icon, I'm working on my Sho one.

[kegom]

Love this! *___*

OK, so I love Leader-centric fic in general (really can't help being an Ohno-fangirl^^"), but I loved this especially for all the little "information-cameo". Like that Jun had a crush on Sho for the longest time (because YES! he was so obviously crushing on Sho in those first days of Arashi that it's not even funny anymore!), or that Jun, Nino and Aiba had been in a Junior-group together, or that Ohno is the one to initiate a lot of physical contact with Sho. (Because I find that quite interesting - especially in concerts it seems that Ohno will often be the one to reach out to Sho to touch him, while he usually is the one who gets touched by the others.)

I also really liked the way you interpreted things that Sho noticably does - like being the first to laugh at whatever Ohno does.

Hopefully, Sho will some day overcome his insecurities and just pounce on Ohno and ravish him! XD (At least in your fic-verse. I'm sure Nino wouldn't mind too much, as long as Sho offers to make an interactive game for him out of it. ;

Re: Please ignore the somewhat inappropriate icon, I'm working on my Sho one.

[chokingsmoker]

yey! thanks!

am an ohno fangirl, too, and love leader-centric fics as a rule, so i thought it fitting that everyone should love him in my first fic. little jun thought the world revolved around sakurai for a while, before he decided it was not so and joined the ohno fan club.

yes, sho usually is the first to laugh at what ohno does, even if it's the most unspectacular thing [ah, but the ohno fangirl in me says, everything ohno does is wonderful *bricked*]. whenever ohno opens his mouth, sho looks at him like he's about to burst with mirth. well not all the time, but still...

sho pouncing on ohno would be good. he'd better make sure nino isn't around, though.

thanks again!

[kegom]

*grin* I did the very same thing in my first fic (making it revolve around Leader, I mean). Because clearly, great minds Ohno-fangirls think alike. XD

That's one of the things I love about Sho - he's so ready to find things in his life hilarious and he seems to regard Ohno as his main source of mirth. ^__^

Sho could pounce on Ohno while Nino's off plotting world domination with Jun and Aiba? (Or at least Jun and Nino are plotting world domination. Aiba is just too distracted by all the shiny things he's allowed to invent to pay much heed to what the goal is.)

[chokingsmoker]

i'll look for your first fic, then. of all your ohno-focused fics, though, the ones with the tattooed ohno are my absolute favorites!

sho and aiba and ohno, they laugh all the time! i love it! what strikes me, though, is that sho seems to be the only one who knows what he is laughing at. *shot*

sho could probably ravish ohno while nino and jun are bickering over who gets to be number one. and i can picture aiba jumping from place to place, saying "oooh, sparkly..." in awe

oh, may i add you?

[panthera_mort]

Oof I like~
It's sweet... in a academic-ish kind of way
(urgghh, gomen for my lousy comment)
It's great how you put Ohno in Sho's mind
:)

'And amidst the blood and gore stood Ohno Satoshi, untainted by it all, his mind frolicking with the dolphins somewhere in fairyland'
Heh. I see this in Ohno's head as well.

[chokingsmoker]

your comment was great! thank you [for reading and commenting]!

Heh. I see this in Ohno's head as well.

he probably rides those dolphins, too, in his mind. or... that probably sounds more like aiba.

thanks again!

[panthera_mort]

Yup.
Both him and Aiba riding the dolphins.
And Nino chasing them (while galloping on a shark) to grab him Oh-chan.
Oof maaan, this is what Arashi fics do to me...
...an even wilder, crazier imagination.
(^^;)

[chokingsmoker]

Yup.
Both him and Aiba riding the dolphins.
And Nino chasing them (while galloping on a shark) to grab him Oh-chan.

i hope they'd make a movie with this sequence. i'd be the first in line to watch when they do!

[trickylady]

LOL.

this was original, and I'm glad to have read it.

(bows)

thanks for having shared it.
There's far too little ShOhno fics in the world.

[chokingsmoker]

thank you for reading. and your comment makes me really happy! yey!

that's true, there's not a lot of ShOhno, which is sad because a number of the good fics i've read are of them.

thanks again!

[i_am_zan]

This is wonderful. I feel that Sho can be hard to gauge with the face he shows to the rest of the world and I find this entirely believable!

I love also how you incorporated canon (this also includes the love of the others for their Leader and also especially between Jun and Ohno. Because he crushes oh so badly!) into your fic and the result is a beautiful observational piece.

Very well written.

Thank you for sharing and will look forward to more for sure! ^__^

- Have a hot and sultry Ohno! - Because I love him too!

[chokingsmoker]

wow. i'm honored that you've commented. i've been reading your fics and been admiring your writing style for a while now. thank you.

jun's crush on ohno is phenomenal! as was his infatuation with sho when they were younger! and it's endearing how jun pretends that no one notices the ohno-crushing.

there are a lot of us who love him. i think the whole world should, because the guy is made of pure love!

thanks again!

[i_am_zan]

Oh -oh and OH!!! *blushes* - I am honoured that you feel honoured! ^__^

That's a lovely compliment. Thank you.

I forgot to add that I also love your little piece because it gives me more of an idea of their backstory. I came to Ohno, tangentially sort of. It surprises people that I have no idea of Johnny's (Up to maybe middle of last year I had no idea who/what JE was) much less Arashi (although I have heard "Hero" before!!!) So it's lovely to read observational and insightful writing on the boys!

The road to Ohno was One Hollywood film, one J-dorama, one episode of Music Station and 'THAT' concert rendition of "Hero" . The rest they say is history.

Thank *YOU* for reading too!

much love.

[chokingsmoker]

this is the best fandom ever! *side note: there's this jrock band that i love, but people in that fandom aren't as awesome as arashi fans! *rainbows and sparkles*

your story "at sea" is one of my favorite fics, and when i get around to doing it, i shall put it and other stories i love in a list with reviews and such. i mean, if it's allowed? *tilts head*

i was baited into this fantabulous fandom by jun [and by the most wonderful of pvs, kitto daijoubu] but ohno eventually became my favorite when i saw him flick his coat in a right back to you performance from the iza now tour.

all he did was flick his coat, yes.

of course when i saw the rain concert performance, my brains went on a trip to heaven and almost had no intention of coming back but decided to return so as not to miss more ohno hip-thrusts. :))

[jamiesteban]

wow, good fic. I'm glad I read this because it's Ohno-centric. haha. I love the way you put other's thought regarding Oh-chan. I've always noticed it too, that whenever Oh-chan do something laughable, Sho would be the first to react. Haha. Like the hidden Ohmiya there.

[chokingsmoker]

hey thanks! and i'm glad that you've read it!

yes, and sho's laughter is made of pure win, too! like he wants the world to laugh with him. i think sho likes having a good laugh, and always looks up to his leader to give him some.

thanks again!