Pride Goeth Before You Fall - Part 2 (of 6)

Feb 15, 2006 10:19

See Part One for story and disclaimer information. Also see Part 1 so you can read it before you read this (which is Part 2, for those paying close attention. Heh ( Read more... )

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enginelovin February 15 2006, 18:36:59 UTC
Hee. I love a drunk Kaylee. Poor clueless Mal, though. And for some reason I loved Mal saying she was littler'n him. :D

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lemniskate February 15 2006, 18:45:20 UTC
48 hours is FAR TOO LONG between sections! far! too! long! ;)

there's no danger of getting tired of this, or it being too much -- you should post just as often as you want to. I love this, and I'm looking forward to following them on the road you're taking them :)

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_astralis February 15 2006, 22:02:33 UTC
Another awesome chapter. I like the way Mal thinks about Kaylee. And 48 hours definitely isn't too short. Just post the chapters whenever you're ready.

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bingblot February 16 2006, 01:08:39 UTC
I am so loving this story!!
Thank you for this cute little chapter; it totally made my otherwise crappy day better. :-)
I love how Mal tries to comfort Kaylee and love how he says that Kaylee's littler than him (for some reason that was such an adorable line.)

Can't wait for more!

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__delicategrace March 20 2006, 09:42:00 UTC
Aww!! I love these two together. You're a great writer.

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