Comments | chrstphrl: Breda/Fury Fluff

chrstphrl

Breda/Fury Fluff

Feb 19, 2007 22:09

I decided that I'd challenge myself to write soemthing complete in thirty minutes. This is the result. I'm not sure if I like it but here it is. I especially like the idea of Roy, Havoc and Heymans staggering and singing.

Title:Normal
Pairing: Breda/Fury
Rating:PG-13 ish
Spoilers: End of series I guess.
Warnings :Fluff and drunks

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Comments 19

secretfreaky February 20 2007, 21:07:56 UTC

Very cute and fluffy!

chrstphrl February 21 2007, 19:15:57 UTC

Thanks! I glad you enjoyed it.

sailormac February 21 2007, 14:05:05 UTC

Awww . . . that was *very* sweet. And I love how stoic Riza is about the whole business of having a household of drunken men -- "Sure, just bring 'em in, throw 'em all over the place." And she'll be the one amused in the morning. ~_^

chrstphrl February 21 2007, 19:19:23 UTC

Thank you. I see Riza as being very tolerant of the boys' antics but totally unsympathetic when they suffer the consequences ... as long as noone gets hurt.

orion117 February 23 2007, 21:19:08 UTC

Havoc and Roy, having lost one third of their collective feet... That image made me laugh. Also, I want to hear more about the incident with Cain and Ed in the bathroom from years past!

I like the idea that they are all able to enjoy some of the ordinary things in life, and Cain seems like the kind of person who would take time to recognize that. Excellent fluff!

chrstphrl February 23 2007, 22:11:13 UTC

Thanks! That made me laugh too and let's just suffice to say that Ed and Cain know a little more about each other than they'd like to remember. And they were caught so everyone teases them. ^-~ I may write about that one day.