First Son (5/7)

Jan 14, 2009 17:09



Patrick had the misfortune of going through two of them in one night and he certainly hit the jackpot; one by a nutcase and another by a drunk.

Once he had gotten Jon off him, he was all too prepared to do the prerequisite chase scene where the dashing leading man runs after his wronged lady love and narrates a sappy apology speech while ( Read more... )

^ fanfiction: first son, * pete/patrick, # fanfiction, * brendon/ryan

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yawnsforfawns January 14 2009, 09:21:17 UTC
FC!!!! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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cieluna January 14 2009, 09:26:59 UTC
hot dang girl, you're fast :DDDDD
yayyyy *does happy congratulatory dance with confetti and a Piñata!Pete* :DDD

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yawnsforfawns January 14 2009, 09:48:26 UTC
lol i just refreshed my flist and it was thereeeeeee -dances ( ... )

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cieluna January 14 2009, 10:21:09 UTC
oooh, fan of morbid metaphors. *jumps*

JWalk can bring himself and we'll do more than consider LOLL

Pete's good that way. Cold bastard.

I hopes you're not electrocutebated by tea on the keyboardd DDD: :))

Patrick is perfect. That's it. :D

I was also so conflicted with the Jon/Patrick while writing because, I don't know, making Patrick too human and real might cross some people, y'know? DD:

but thank you SOOOOO much for the frigging compliments that make me want to cry but i end up snorting dustbunnies 'cause of your picspams haha

zomg saying i'm the patrick stump of fanfic is like blasphemyyy *shushes you*

the picspams make me want to go and hack your flickr or something :))) lol :)) damn you for making me want to raid my cookie jar omg that sounded so dirty hahahaha :))

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of_silverandsky January 14 2009, 10:07:55 UTC
DDDDDDDDDD: I just got back from class DDD:
-reads-

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of_silverandsky January 14 2009, 10:34:08 UTC
yfiosahgaklgyapha
OMG Y SO KYOOT MIKEYWAY? I swear that this story will never be so awesome without a retarded Mikey.

And ‘The electrocuted dolphin’~ yes please.

WHY THIS STORY ONLY HAVE 7 CHAPTERS?
DD:

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cieluna January 15 2009, 17:09:53 UTC
omg retarded!Mikey hahaha :)) that made me laugh so hard, haha :))

we all wants summa' dem dolphins, yes we do :D

...i shall answer by chapter 7 'cause i'm still a bit undecided :))

Thank you!

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black_vortex January 14 2009, 11:52:39 UTC
Awwww. Poor Pete. And poor Patrick. And that's about as far as I can get, I just feel *so* badly for them. Patrick as a music judge? Yes please, can't wait for the next part.

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belle_lestrange January 14 2009, 13:58:31 UTC
*curls up with petecoon* poor him :( and poor trick!

but omg i adore the way brothers so much in this hahaha

what is going to happen next chapter? omg i want it! i NEED it! oO

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jordanzgrl17 January 14 2009, 17:40:35 UTC
Poor Pete :( I feel so bad for him. Pattycakes should just get it together already and tell Pete how he feels. Stop making out with J-Walk in the corner of your garage!?!?

I also sense the beginning of a beautiful friendship between the future Panic! boys. :)

You were right, I did like this chapter!

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jordanzgrl17 January 14 2009, 17:43:17 UTC
Oh, and Brendon does indeed act like an 'electrocuted dolphin' on stage. I've seen it with my own ten eyes...

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cieluna January 15 2009, 17:08:19 UTC
Patty, unfortunately, lost with his battle with hormones. :| :\

Panic...I'm not talking 'cause I might spoil the next chapter :))

Hahaha, yes, I watched one of his performances and I kinda felt scared that he'd fall off :))

Thank youuu!

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