First Son (5/7)

[cieluna]

Patrick had the misfortune of going through two of them in one night and he certainly hit the jackpot; one by a nutcase and another by a drunk.

Once he had gotten Jon off him, he was all too prepared to do the prerequisite chase scene where the dashing leading man runs after his wronged lady love and narrates a sappy apology speech while

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[xfireworkzstarx]

FECKER!
THERE CAN'T ONLY BE TWO MORE TO GO =[
THATS LIKE...HARDLY ANYTHING =[ I GET ALL HAPPY WHEN I GO TO MY INBOX AND SEE YOU'VE UPDATED

I SQUEE ON THE FUCKING BUS XDXD AND THEN WHUT?!!

YOU HAVE TO GO AND FUCKING END IT SO SOON =[
bitch (n'aw i love you raaaally [A LOT])
so will you write a sequel?
or are you going to be fucking means and like kill everyone off with A MASSIVE NUCLEAR BOMB THAT VAPORISES EVERYONE THEN THERE'S NOT PROBLEM OF JON OR PETE AS EVERYONE IS FUCKING DEAD.

wow that would be a depressing story.
emo!story is emoo....
XDXDXDXD i hate nuclear bombs...
nasty thoughts /:

PETERICK BABY!
ah no wait... this isn't happy fluff..it's really fucking awesome ~dramaBETCH XD

[cieluna]

You're def. getting the fluff cause of the awesomeawesomeHUGEFRICKINGCOMMENT :))

i am slightly impartial with nuclear weapons so.. that's a possibility. lol :)) just kidding :D

hahaha, isn't everybody tired of the nerdy!patrick and hotpopularclingy!pete... oh wait, that's my fic too. whoops. :))

i think i should get like 20% commission for all the gummy worms sales this fic would create :)) i'm actually responsible for buying like a bucket, 3 days ago, so that's why it keeps getting mentioned, loll

if you eats me, i dun have anymore gummy wurmmmmsss DD:

ZOMG patrick's gummy worm HAHAHA :))

updated alreadyyy ;) :DD

[xfireworkzstarx]

FUCK YES MOFO'S FUCKING FLUFF FUCKERY FUCK YES!

LOLOLOLOL we all know you really have a basement full =o *joins your side* XD

IT'S IMPOSSIBLE TO GET TIRED OF IT!
illegal!patrick is also so so so hot :]
babysitter!pete like 20 year old and babysitee!patrick like 14 hehhh :]

~YOU SHOULD! you'd be a millionaire then xD
that'd be awesome
whut would you buy?
patrick and pete, then force them to make a sex tape...or the whole of fbr...and a big fbr orgy XD

NONONOOOOOOO I WANT GUMMY WORMS *UN NOM UN NOM UN NOM UN NOM UN NOM*

XDXDXD it's a smexy thaaanggg ;]

*RUNS TO READ*

[outrageous_mo]

I ALWAYS FORGET WHAT I'M LOOKING FOR ... sometimes I go into the wrong room and forget...

This chapter made me wanna cry ... but then it made me laugh. You are an amazing writer, SERIOUSLY.

Jon is slimy anus head and should crawl back to band camp.. What a FREAK.. Hmph!

I wanna hug Pete so bad >.

[cieluna]

That definitely happens to me too much :| I think I need memory pills or something..

Jon is slimy anus head and should crawl back to band camp
omg you don't know how much i laughed at that hahaha thank youuuu :))

I hope you like the update ;DD

[periadoc]

ok this is going to sound weird but when did Patrick change his middle name to Vaughn?

but other than that short out break. eeee! update!!

[cieluna]

It was a while ago, he posted it on his website :DD
I love your icon!!! ♥
Ooh, house/wilson fan too? :DDD

[wtfxslutface]

*Pouts*
*Sniff Sniff*
Gawd! Poor patrick but at the same time STUPID BOYS! He should totes be running after Pete flailing his arms and yelling "But I luuuurve you PETER!!!!!!!"
I make sad eyes at you now!

AND JON"S A SKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ! How do you DO IT?! Seriously!? (Totally admirable quality m'dear, teddy!Jon gets quite old...wow, never thought I'd say THAT)

OK OK OK
Chappie 6 will be sweeter right (That reminds me GUMMI WORMS!!!!!!!) with like Pete and Patrick skipping down sidewalks holding hands and al that jazz?!
Kay <333333

[cieluna]

I actually wanted to do that but I think Jon poked me in the eye and forced me to do angst DDD:

*gasps*
NOOOO
*covers your mouth*
teddy!Jon fanatics might hunt us down and burn us at the stake DDD: :))

...i shall not comment and simply ask you to read chapter six *runs away* :DD

Thank youuu!

[washingbasket]

I have no words .......
STOP MAKING ME SPEECHLESS OR IMA HAVE TO TAKE YOUR CROWN!
no no i take that back you deserve it!
<3
S.

[cieluna]

*glues crown to head*
:DDD
Aww, thank you sooo much! :')
Hope you don't take away my crown when you read the next chapterrr D: :D