First Son (5/7)

Jan 14, 2009 17:09



Patrick had the misfortune of going through two of them in one night and he certainly hit the jackpot; one by a nutcase and another by a drunk.

Once he had gotten Jon off him, he was all too prepared to do the prerequisite chase scene where the dashing leading man runs after his wronged lady love and narrates a sappy apology speech while ( Read more... )

^ fanfiction: first son, * pete/patrick, # fanfiction, * brendon/ryan

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kittygrenade January 14 2009, 20:59:09 UTC
LoL at Mikey and Gerard. Gosh I love those two even more.

*huggles Patrick and Pete while glaring at Jon* I see Mr.Walker and ulterior shenanigans!

*flails* I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

♥♥♥♥

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cieluna January 15 2009, 16:57:44 UTC
They seriously need their own spin-off but I fear they'll run out of things to talk about, loll :))

..no comment. please see next chapter. *runs away*

:DD i posted it slightly early so hope you like it~ xD

Thank youuu! :D

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kittygrenade January 15 2009, 18:26:27 UTC
OMG I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW! *FLAILS AND RUNS OFF TO READ*

You're welcome deary. =^-^=

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xoneandonlyx January 14 2009, 21:34:34 UTC
-sniff-

patty, don't do it!!!
lol.

remember pete?!?!?

love this story.

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cieluna January 15 2009, 16:53:19 UTC
Patty's confused right now :(

Oh and when you asked 'remember pete?', I suddenly remembered a part of my sixth chapter ;DD
you have to go and see it *giggles*

Thank you sooo much :')

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detox_to_retox January 14 2009, 22:21:00 UTC
;_____;
Oh noez.
OH PETER!
YOU SHOULD'VE REALIZED THAT PATRICK DOESN'T LOOOVE HIM!!
-shakes fist-
You best be forgiving him!
Or else!
And Patrick, you better be confessing your love for him sometime during this Battle of the Bands!
D:

I hate you.
And I love you.
D;

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cieluna January 15 2009, 16:55:26 UTC
I choose to believe the latter statement, if that's alright? ^^;

I'm making up for it in chapter six, which is up, so please don't shake your fist at Pete, he's actually a huge coward and would cry to Hemmy if you do :) :D

Thank youuu~ :DD

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cieluna January 15 2009, 16:44:46 UTC
Seriously, woman. How can I not love you??? I ♥ YOUR COMMENTS SO MUCH THAT I FROWN IF I DON'T SEE THEM. ;__;

sorry for the angst DD: i just had to, y'know? ^^;

Tabloids are mean, mean, mean. And they take pictures of 'Trick and someone other than Pete :(

OH DEAR. I think you're psychic. That's how I imagine Spencer, seriously :)))

Patrick made Andy very sad with his fail!Letters. :))

Oh and yes, pictures are creepy when you're a kid.. Not sure with others but I, along with you, definitely felt so, haha!

Hahaha, I'm not telling you about the battle 'cause the chap's up already and I'm not cheatinggg :))

I actually tend to do that, most are on purpose, to note the sudden change of action but there are some nasty little buggers that are really just errors in grammar, haha ^^; Thank you so much though!

I just might write a sequel :3 ;;) hahaha!

THANK YOU AGAIN SOOO MUCH :*

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submissionadict January 14 2009, 23:13:40 UTC
“No, Patrick, only Gerard’s my brother,” Mikey muttered, as a look of concern flickered across his eyes, “you alright?”

(YYYYY)
and Patrick's just adorably awkward

exesandohesxo

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cieluna January 15 2009, 16:45:39 UTC
Mikey tends to wonder why Patrick says the weirdest little things. Haha :))

Hope you like my update ;D

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